The Singer Who Dances With His Songs

silverstrummer -  David Everitt

The Singer Who Dances With His Songs

Just A Singers Lament

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“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow” – David

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The curtains go back, applaud after applaud,
A rumble from the drums and vibe from the bass,
A clash of symbols now starts the race,
The rhythm Guitar sings out its melodies,
The lead Guitar takes the stage and talks its talk!
The audience aghast as the music now plays,
The singer takes a deep breath, and sings his song

I saw you by the lamp sitting at the bar
My eyes looked at you ……..from afar
I walked by ………and you smiled
What perfume …....are you wearing?
I had to walk by again the aroma so strong
Oh those arms are where I want to belong
I grabbed your arm and pulled you close

You smiled and flirted as I held your waist,
So slim your body and such a beautiful face,
My hands running up and down the curvature of your spine,
Sending sensual rhythms to your soul,
So get prepared girl were gonna Rock like King Creole

Your body so twisting and yet so firm
Your lips are pouting and look inviting
A kiss upon your lips I place
I saw that sexy smile again upon your face!
We danced and twisted and gave a shout,
We try every move you could possibly think about!
The grinding of our hips displaced
Brings sighs and wonderment to your face!

Our dance so hot you were to perspire
That sensual smell and perfume too
Brought us to the level of no return
Our souls connected for one more time
Pulses racing……. heartfelt beating
Emotions weakening and bodies giving
Our dance is now complete and its time to relate
We must arrange another place for our next date!

The singer puts down his mic stand and the music stops
And applaud after applaud as the curtains closed!

  • UrsulaDee

    UrsulaDee

    Beautiful, you talented fellow you. Love this.
    Ursula XXXX

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    aaww Stop it I’m blushing!! Lol I’m glad you liked this I wasn’t too sure but if you say yes then it must be from such a singer yourself and Poet and Artist and a beautiful soul xx – David

  • linifer

    linifer

    Oh wow! Brilliant writing!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    aaww don’t you start too Lin Lol Thank you I’ m pleased you like this
    - David

  • invisible

    invisible

    BEAUTIFUL POEM !

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Andre I’m pleased that you liked this and thanks for your comments they are appreciated! – David :>))

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm

    David your a star mate when i comes to the written word! Totally love this! Bravo!!!...)o(

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow that is a compliment from a wordsmith such as yourself Mall thank you very much I appreciate your comments! I’m glad you liked this! – David

  • scoob29

    scoob29

    Fntastic David.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks again Susan I appreciate your comments and support. – David

  • tkrosevear

    tkrosevear

    gotta love groupies…a beautifully written poem David ;) xoxox

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol Thank you Tammy I’m pleased that you liked this …..... in fact only last week I was a Rodie for a little time Lol – David

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Beautiful…just beautiful!!!!!! xoxoxo

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Sally I’m very pleased you liked this also! I appreciate your comments. – David

  • Amber Elizabeth Fromm Donais
  • silverstrummer... replied

    Oh Wow I am so took aback with this feature thank you so much I feel very humbled – David

  • imagineering

    imagineering

    Wonderful and refreshing work – congratulations, much deserved…

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much for your kind comments they are very much appreciated! – David

  • linskudd

    linskudd

    Amazing words…I love your writing.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much for your kind comments lin I appreciate them very much – David

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you also for the fav. – David

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Congrats on your marvelous feature, so well deserved!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Rhena very much for your kind comments – David

  • wigs

    wigs

    this is so beautiful…you write so well, I am enjoying reading your work…

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much wigs for your lovely comments I appreciate them very much and you have left me with a smile for today! I’m very pleased you like my work! – David

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Such a waiting…such a pain….
    to leave the moment where time does not..
    come.. again…
    Unfullilled extreme of passion,
    rythmmed and danced as a venom serpent,
    ondulating performance of the needs,
    what does not fly and walks…
    simply crawls….
    repting essence of deliriuum,
    how could you say bye to a cinder..?
    After so much clashing of the cymbals,
    and the basso sustaining the inside moaning,
    and the guitar alone…..pitching the crying,
    of a convulsive melody…
    apparently soft and sensitive,
    and inside..
    oh… how could you leave her..
    for tomorrow?
    Rosa (such a good question David!!! and….. oh.. good to hear you again here… so good.a hug for you, love your torrid stories.)

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi dear Rosa – as always you leave beautiful comments like the sounds from a harp always a pleasing sound! You describe the dance perfectly in spirit and soul.
    Thank you also for spending the time to leave your wonderful comments …...... I appreciate them very much …........ my kindest regards to you both – hugz – David

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