Drumming Up Love

I sit beside you, look you up and down,
Beautiful and sexy even all round .
Your skin so lovely and taught
Ready to play with those sexy thoughts.

Your snare rounded in chrome
Certainly enhances your equipment,
Big bass drum with pedal afoot
You both give a graceful sound
A Top-hat with no tails,
Standing upright shining in the light
Your chrome makes a distinctive stand
Movements made by a pedal on the floor.

Two adjacent tom toms aligned each side of my big bass
With a 12” symbol making a shade from the lights just in case
One cowbell to add to this beautiful array.
Such a great drum-set I must say!

My right foot at the ready on the bass pedal,
My left foot at the ready on my top-hats,
Drumsticks are ready and in my hands
I can feel the vibes already in your snare!

A rhythmic sound comes from the big bass drum,
Whilst a drum roll on the snare begins
A clash of top-hats add to the sound.
Now we are ready to rock!

The tingling vibrations, make you go insane
Such a powerful sound, that’s so profound,
Head is swaying and full of rhythm
My eyes are closed ……. I am adrift.
Somewhere in this sound … I can be found!

The penetration of vibes can now be felt
Such sexy music so wonderful in its core,
Beads of perspiration fall droplets onto the floor,
Making you feel beautiful feelings within,

Body tingling with glorious overtones
Dancing in rhythm our song comes to end
Silence now as the drums stop their beat
But still there still is a tapping in my feet!


This just a poem I drummed up, hope you enjoy it!

“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow”

“© Copyright 2009 – 2012 – All Rights Reserved – All works registered through Copyright House”

Published work: “The Orchestral Ensemble”, “Love Measures” I received a letter from “H.M. Queen Elizabeth” thanking me for a poem on her Diamond Jubilee in 2012. I was chosen as one of a very small group of Poets out of 60,000 poets and invited to place “My Love for You” in a “Poets Diary 2013” A true story called “An Attack in a Cemetery” will be published in 2013. I am being featured in a book which has a profile and 20 poems placed called “10 of the Best” 2013 by United Press of London.

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Comments

  • billyboy
    billyboyalmost 6 years ago

    Wow… this is SO without condom…
    Nice work!

  • Lol that made me laugh Bill I’m trying to save the condoms ……….. nobody seems to use them nowadays anyway!! Thanks for your comments I’m still laughing! – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • LorenaLo
    LorenaLoalmost 6 years ago

    David, this is so beutiful, brillant my friend… Stiched to perfection..
    Many congrats!
    Lorena

  • What a lovely thing to say “Stiched to perfection” brilliant! Thank you so much Lorena – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • CanDuCreations
    CanDuCreationsalmost 6 years ago

    Beautiful, very well written poetry

  • Thank you also Thea for being so supportive too! I am very pleased that you liked this – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • Dawn B Davies-McIninch
    Dawn B Davies-...almost 6 years ago

    wonderfully written,dawnx

  • Thank You Dawn I’m pleased that you liked this and thank you for your support too. – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • izzybeth
    izzybethalmost 6 years ago

    beautifully naughty!!!

  • Lol I’m glad you liked this …….. its not that naughty Lol
    Read my Guitar Love I hope you enjoy this one too. Thanks for your comments they are appreciated – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • linifer
    liniferalmost 6 years ago

    Brilliant!!!! oxo

  • I’m pleased you liked this I wasn’t too sure but when I posted it I was quite happy with it. Thank you for your continuing support too – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • tkrosevear
    tkrosevearalmost 6 years ago

    I will never look at drums the same again ;) xoxoxo

  • Lol Thank you tk I’m pleased that you liked this – Thanks for your comments they are very much appreciated – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • Jomei
    Jomeialmost 6 years ago

    Just love the way you write about music and your love affair with it. Legendary.

  • Thank you Jim I appreciate your comments very much Im pleased that you like my way of musical love! – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • Astoreth
    Astorethalmost 6 years ago

    Your musical love is wonderful David, I’m still pounding to the rythm….lol….I was totally floored by that first comment….lmao. xxxx

  • Lol Thank you you made me smile I’m glad that you like this …. I have sent a letter of complaint to Bill about his condom ……..its started me laughing again ,,,,,,,,,,,,, I found it so funny! There are 3 things important in life 1) is a woman 2) is Love and 3) is music …. Check out my Guitar Love I think you will like this one too – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • littlestmonkey
    littlestmonkeyalmost 6 years ago

    This made me laugh our loud with the sheer joy of it…..you have certainly hit it on the head with your words…..beau-ti-fully written and expressed….another winner I am sure! ♥

  • Thank you M for your kind comments my friend I appreciate them very much and I’m very pleased that you liked this too! – David

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

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