Guitar Love

silverstrummer -  David Everitt

Guitar Love

Just the thoughts that go through a musicians mind when he gets carried away with his 2nd love of his life!

I hope you enjoy these words please leave a comment if you have the time. I would love to see what you thought about it

I am very pleased that “Guitar Love” inspired Robin Monroe
Song of Soul it also inspired Robin to complete her song with her artwork
Sweet Melody

If you haven’t seen Robin’s work please click here

FEATURED IN :-
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Nirvana – 3rd May 2009

“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow” – David

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Wow such a beautiful neck and soulful body twisting with such great rhythm, closing my eyes and feeling those vibes and coming to the crescendo, droplets across my forehead and a I gasp for air. Then I pluck so carefully at your heart strings and make you shout louder and stronger the tones in your voice are screaming with ecstasy bending the sounds make you more intense and finally just a slight caress and to say didn’t we have a great night together?

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    Wow – David this is very clever – excellent piece of writing and very sexy !! XX

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Trust you little miss quick I was still loading it Lol not bad for an oldie!! I’m glad you liked it!
    - David :>))

  • bamagirl38

    bamagirl38

    This is terrific !!!! Wow! Love it and well written!!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much it took 5 minutes to do tonight I’m glad that you liked it!
    but it tired me out phew!! Lol – David :>))

  • elphonline

    elphonline

    well-written.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi elphonline – Thanks for popping by and leaving a comment Its very much appreciated! – David :>))

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Beautifully written David.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Sharon so much for all your support and comments I’m very pleased that you liked this one! – David

  • UrsulaDee

    UrsulaDee

    Great piece of poetic art, I’ve added this to my favourites. I look forward to reading more Dave.
    With love. Ursula :~)

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Bless Thank you Ursula this only took 5 minutes maybe I can turn it into lyrics …. hope you are both ok! Thanks for the fav too – David

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Find the way of extasis and the sounds of Life and Love.
    There are climax witihout external sounds…
    like a flower.. tenderly aroused by a breethe..
    but it just changes with the ear’s capacity…
    is a matter of perception….
    loud or silenced…
    the pleasure is a wave…
    that comes from the inner soul and world.
    Rosa (precious)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Rosa for your beautiful comments again they are very much appreciated. I’m glad you liked this. – David

  • littlestmonkey

    littlestmonkey

    Chuckle, chuckle…..Liked this piece…..nicely written:)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol I just took one look and thought of “Percy Filth” and hey presto, I’m pleased that you liked it – David

  • littlestmonkey

    littlestmonkey

    ps…very tactful of you to say the “2nd love of your life” , clever boy:)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol I couldn’t do any other could I? We would be lost without a good woman to show us men folk the ropes!!

  • littlestmonkey

    littlestmonkey

    Very true….and it works both ways:)

  • MyheART

    MyheART

    wonderful…plays a beautiful tune…love how you described the joy of a guitar…I think I’ll have to now pull my guitar out of the corner wipe the dust off and play it…have not played in awhile…your poetry inspire(smiles):)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much Robin for your wonderfull comments, you get that guitar out and give it some!! You might suprise yourself. Have a nice weekend – David

  • jim marshal

    jim marshal

    I’m with ya man! Just got myself a Washburn acoustic after a long separation from my muse. Feels nice.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Its always good to keep it up with your guitar don’t mistreat her and put her in the cupboard always keep her near and tell her all your woes!
    Not a bad choice in picking your Guitar too! – David

  • MyheART

    MyheART

    I did…and I came up with a song which I posted…my fingers are sore though(lol)...and although the words came to me still need to work out the chords…it was fun though…so thanks so much for the inspiration with your poem:)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow Robin thats wonderful ….......sorry about the sore fingers ….... I know that can sometimes be painful …...... but what comes from pain? More gain and you certainly did that. It makes me feel very proud of you composing now your talents are shining! – David

  • linaji

    linaji

    I so love how you have inspired others.. Robin is such a dear as are you and this is a very inspiring piece. I like to know that it was you dear David that had your sweet and kind ways involved in Robins lovely creation of words!! You are a dove and a wonderful Creator!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    linaji – You have made me blush with such kind words ….. I do like to encourage people always have done in my life …. each person has a tremendous talent in their own way and its a great feeling to have helped in a very small way. I am stuck for words now Thank you so much Ma’am as I tip my hat!! – David

  • Hannah Fenton-Williams

    Hannah Fenton-...


    This was just Featured in
    WMG

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow Thank you Hannah I’m dancing in melodies …....... I am so pleased with the feature – David

  • rubyjo

    rubyjo

    i think i need to learn how to play the guitar :)
    well written

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi rubyjo – nice of you to pop in and leave a comment its very much appreciated Thank You! You must try out the guitar sometime….. learn a couple of chords and strum on! You will get used to it – David

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    nice words David..fingering a piano sure dosnt come close 2 playing an axe..no strings attached LOL :)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol as you know my friend any music from any instrument is beautiful! Hope things are still going great with you! – David

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    Congratulations on the well deserved Feature!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks for the compliments! – David

  • rubyjo

    rubyjo

    actually david i was thinkging if someone would play me the way you play your guitar, well…
    lol

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol when you put it like that then I can understand why too! ............. Naughty Lol

  • JenLand

    JenLand

    Oh! LOVE it!! Beautiful, sensual and sexy!! I find something very HOT about watching an accomplished musician playing his guitar with such abandon and assurance. :o)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Jen – I’m glad you liked these sausy words …. .you are so kind with your comments, they are appreciated so much, – David

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Your work has been featured in NIRVANA
    Well deserved it…!!
    Have a hug..
    Congratulations David.
    Rosa

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow thank you dear Rosa for this feature I am honoured and thanks for the hugs too bless – David

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    The sensuality of creating music! So intelligently written. And very seductively too.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Jono the Master of Words your comments are really appreciated. Take care – David

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    and its totally cool with you just playing it…. how perfect is that ? hahaha
    great piece david

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks Shoaib for your comments and I’m very pleased that you like this work too – David

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    so clever and filled with passion. Wonderful David

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much cathrine it means a lot – David

  • pillipala

    pillipala

    this is awesome
    if it wasn’t for the title i wouldn’t have guessed you were talking about a guitar…
    - Maya

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol thanks Maya glad you liked this! Maybe I should have changed the title and put Guitar Love at the end of the verse! – David

  • pillipala

    pillipala

    yeah, that would have kept people guessing right till the end :P

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol it certainly – David

  • MrHill

    MrHill

    great piece..i love the nights with mine…..thanks…

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Sorry for the late reply MrHill your comments had slipped thro’ my net! I’m pleased you liked this I appreciate your comments very much thank you – David

  • Martin Muir

    Martin Muir

    Just awesome Dave well written mate.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Martin – Thank You I really appreciate your valued comments …...... I’m very pleased that you liked it! – David

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    The love we make with and to our instruments compares to nothing else. Beautiful writing.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Cassidy – so sorry I have missed your comment 18 days! Thank you my friend as you know music is a comfort . the thing is with me when strummin I close my eyes and fall asleep!! Lol
    Take Care young Cassidy and as always I appreciate your welcomed comments – David

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