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Bon Voyage Ms Tainia Finlay

What you are about to read will make you smile and frown,
But behold behind the storyline, two friends have just been found!
Was it Fate? Or was it Luck? We will never really know.
So read on dear friend and remember me where ere you may go!

You see I met dear Fin via the internet, oh she was so nice,
So much better than that “Old Ginger Spice”!
And a lot better than that nurse I saw “Old Antoinette”!

Our Lives had gone through a real bad patch, we both lost someone good,
Our lives had changed so much by now we had lost dear ones we loved!
Life is so short, and this we knew, and both fully understood,
Everyday is a bonus, and should be enjoyed, as we found out to the good!

We gained each others trust, we became good friends, but we had never met,
So that’s as far as it goes, with my new friend and I from the Internet!
But things were happening on the internet, it was getting very hot,
For a young Aussie bloke did smite young Fin, and down under she did go!
And I was smitten by a Russian wench, to the eastern country I did flow!

We both came back from our wondering wants, and to arrange to meet we did,
We talked about our foreign trips and gained a lot of knowledge,
For we had lots to tell each other, some things were very good,
And some things were very horrid!

But alas my dear friend you must be gone to Australia you have been called!
Your new life begins this year dear Fin, take it in your stride and enjoy!

I think I will shed tears that day, when you leave old Blighty and Me behind.
So take care Milady, where ere ye go and let fortune smile on you!
You’re the best friend that I could have, and thank you for just being You!
I will always think of you with great affection!
XX Dave (alias Mr “P”) This is not a farewell just a “Bon Voyage!”

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“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow”

This was written for my dear friend Tainia Finlay as she left old Blighty for OZ … most of you know her as Tai … I have had Tai’s permission to show this. So I really want to dedicate this writing to Tai as she is a person that you would all like as a friend, and she is also an Angel because she cares so much about people! I hope you enjoy reading this as I enjoyed writing it!

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Published work: “The Orchestral Ensemble”, “Love Measures” I received a letter from “H.M. Queen Elizabeth” thanking me for a poem on her Diamond Jubilee in 2012. I was chosen as one of a very small group of Poets out of 60,000 poets and invited to place “My Love for You” in a “Poets Diary 2013” A true story called “An Attack in a Cemetery” will be published in 2013. I am being featured in a book which has a profile and 20 poems placed called “10 of the Best” 2013 by United Press of London.

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Comments

  • Adrian Kent
    Adrian Kentover 5 years ago

    Hiya David, beautiful work, enjoyed reading it, all life is very much like that I feel.

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...over 5 years ago

    Blimey Adrian you were quick I had just posted it!! Thanks for your welcomed comments they are very much appreciated! – David :>))

  • handprintz
    handprintzover 5 years ago

    Such a wonderful dedication to a lovely lady David, she is one of my favourite artists here on RB ,thank you for sharing this !

  • Bless Thank You Trudi she certainly is a lovely lady …….. the thanks really go to Tai for allowing me to post it on RB ……… I am very privileged to have met and shared some bad times with this remarkable talented and caring lady ………….. it was Tai that introduced me to RB .. my torch is still simmering in the background! Thank you so much for your kind comments,they are always welcomed! – David :>))

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • littlestmonkey
    littlestmonkeyover 5 years ago

    I think it was fate!!!…..excellent story, well written:)

  • Hi M thank you for your comment and support in my work I value your comments and they are so welcomed too! – David :>))

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • Tpp2
    Tpp2over 5 years ago

    LOVELY!!! Beautiful writing David!!! you are amazing!

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...over 5 years ago

    hahaha not as good as your painting though!! thanks Teresa for your always kind comments!
    Take Care – David :>))

  • SKNickel
    SKNickelover 5 years ago

    This is wonderful

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...over 5 years ago

    Thank You SKNickel for your comments I’m very pleased that you liked it – David :>))

  • barnsis
    barnsisover 5 years ago

    Another well done for this one.

  • Thank you so much spending the time to looking in and commenting on my work. It it so ,much appreciated! – David :>))

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosover 5 years ago

    She must be real happy…
    I would love to be writen in such a wonderful terms… wether I would have to leave this site…
    or wish to leave it… or simply leave it..
    Free wtiting… freegoing….freewheeling… David.
    Good
    Rosa

  • Thank you Rosa for your wonderful words as always! ………. I hope you don’t leave this site! …….. I like the “freegoing” and “freewheeling”
    - David :>))

    – David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)

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