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Buenos Notches

A trip to the local supermarket,
Which was small but even large at the same time.
Things placed in high places and in a row,
It seemed to encase the view,
Oh where is the milk? I wish I knew!

After filling our basket with books, eats and drinks,
Off now to the cashier me-thinks.
What a shock no waiting at the till,
I plied my Spanish on the young Senorita,
It was not that good, in fact it died!

“Buenos Notches” is what I said,
What a perfect fool I thought,
Your daft in the head!

The young Senorita politely smiled,
Then shown me the error of my ways,
By correcting my Spanish dialogue,
I did leave the shop in a daze!
What a nice young lady,
To have spent a little time with me,
So as not for me to forget!

I shall always remember that,
In the mornings it is Buenos Dias,
And not Buenos Notches which is the evening,
Without so much of a regret, I shall certainly not forget!

Buenos Notches

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“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow”

A trip to a supermarket in Ibiza – Spanish learning lessons at the till.

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Published work: “The Orchestral Ensemble”, “Love Measures” I received a letter from “H.M. Queen Elizabeth” thanking me for a poem on her Diamond Jubilee in 2012. I was chosen as one of a very small group of Poets out of 60,000 poets and invited to place “My Love for You” in a “Poets Diary 2013” A true story called “An Attack in a Cemetery” will be published in 2013. I am being featured in a book which has a profile and 20 poems placed called “10 of the Best” 2013 by United Press of London.

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Comments

  • Fern Design
    Fern Designabout 6 years ago

    this is good made me laugh.. I have done things like that.. hehe

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...about 6 years ago

    Lol it still makes me laugh today and I thought I was the only one!!! Thank You for your comments I do appreciate them! – David :>))

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosalmost 6 years ago

    Buenas tardes David…..
    I am not a señorita…
    but I feel glad for you
    being so kind to any one.
    David.
    Rosa

  • David A. Everitt (aka silverstrummer)
    David A. Everi...almost 6 years ago

    Lol Buenas tardes Rosa ……….. Thank You so kindly ……………… your support and comments are always welcomed …….. in the house of thoughts and heartfelt feelings – David :>))

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