My Spirit In The Sky

silverstrummer -  David Everitt

My Spirit In The Sky

“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow” – David

This was written in 2004 my feelings at this time were very confused, but I hope you enjoy reading it and thank you so much for your time!

“My Spirit In The Sky” © Copyright 2004 – 2009
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Where are you my spirit in the sky?
My love for you will never die!
You are my one and only love.
Whispering secrets to me from above.

We had so many good times!
In our lives together.
Our love was to be everlasting!
For ever and ever.
But alas it was not to be.
You left me, oh can’t you see!
I miss you and you miss me.

Maybe one day we will somehow know!
Why we have to suffer things so!
What has made me oh so sad?
What kind of thing can make me glad?
I look to the future, but I can’t see much!
I am so confused and out of touch!
Is there a way of telling what is there?
Only memories that I carry, will I share!

I can remember when we walked hand in hand.
Across the beach, shuffling our feet beneath the sand.
To hear the waves, come crashing down.
We saw seagulls soaring up above,
Screeching out their songs of love.
This is what I can see, the memories of you and me!
I still look back and wonder why!
Why did you really have to die?

Where are you my spirit in the sky?
My love for you will never die!
You are my one and only love.
Whispering secrets to me from above.

  • Romo

    Romo

    beautiful:)

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Romo for your nice comments I am very pleased you liked this one too!!!
    Take care – David :>))

  • merlin67

    merlin67

    This is so beautiful and touching. I feel privilaged to share your thoughts and feelings.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Merlin, I appreciate your valued comments. :>))

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    BEAUTIFUL

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Keith your comments are so welcomed :>))

  • handprintz

    handprintz

    Lovely heartfelt words beautifully written ….............

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Trudi for your kind words your comments are so welcomed too!! – David :>))

  • Fern Design

    Fern Design

    just wonderful.. love it..

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You – thoughtful for your kind comment and I am very pleased that you liked it – David :>))

  • cathrinedp

    cathrinedp

    so delicately sad. Well written.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You cathrine for your comments they are very welcomed! – David :>))

  • invisible

    invisible

    I’m so touched ….exquisite poem !

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You “invisible” your comments are greatly appreciated! – David :>))

  • Chookas

    Chookas

    A beautiful treatise to the loneliness of grief
    Many of my fellow countrymen will be feeling this for a long time to come thanks to the weekend we’ve had!
    ☼ Bravo! ☼

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Chookas for your kind comments. It is terrible about the bush fires …... here in the UK we heard this morning that 130 people have lost their lives …........ such a tragedy my heart goes out to all those peoples families in their struggle to come to terms with their loss’s. – David :>((

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Terrible dream…
    partner and love..gone…
    how would say verses of the soul
    in case you were gone first?
    You…
    she,
    I….dream sometimes
    such a loss.
    Terrible dream…
    dancing on the sand waves..
    those that get mixed up…
    soft mating of the earth,
    by the extreme breathing
    of a sea.. which is not gone.
    And will bring the heart dear heart beating
    to your inner core.
    Rosa

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank you so much Rosa such a beautiful meaning verse …...... I felt the love and compassion of your words. I would love to write poetry like you do!! Thank You! – David :>))

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