Two Young Sorceres's

silverstrummer -  David Everitt

Two Young Sorceres's

“Two Young Sorceres’s” – A Collaboration Of Two Artist’s

Firstly I would like to apologise for adding this into my “Art” and not my “Writing” which is where my story belongs but at the time I did not know how to add the “Artwork” into my description.

The Artwork belongs to AnneMei

I would like to thank AnnMei for her kind consent of using her artwork to compliment the story! Please visit AnnMei” she is truly a wonderful Artist.

This short story was inspired by the work of AnnMei called “Two Young Sorceress” We hope you enjoy this story as much as we enjoyed putting this together!

FEATURED IN :-
1) Dimensions – March 2009

2) Freedom In Words – March 2009

3) In – Between – March 2009

4) The Feature Fraternity – April 2009

5) Bits and Pieces – 21st April 2009

6) First Things Group – 17th May 2009

FEATURED, FEATURE IN :-
The Feature Fraternity Group – 31st March 2009

“Live Life For Today And Save A Smile For Somebody Tomorrow” – David

“Two Young Sorceres’s” Copyright 2009
All Rights Reserved – MCN: CE3A2-0A68E-8D118


Two sisters Arina and Dasha had to stay at Grandpa’s house in the woods, whilst their Mum was in hospital having a baby. Well Grandpa’s old house was a big house and had lots of windows, chimneys and loads of shadows on the ground which was so scary, there was a big garden that went all around the house with brick walls as high as giants too!

One day Grandpa told the girls to go and play upstairs whilst he washes his car outside, Arina and Dasha went upstairs and decided to play hide and seek, Dasha hid behind some big curtains, unfortunately Dasha forgot to hide her feet too. Arina shouts “Coming ready or not” well Arina looked up and down the long corridor and she saw these two little feet that were only half hidden. Arina pulled back the big heavy curtains and shouted gotcha! She had frightened Dasha but only for a moment as behind her was a secret door, they both looked at each other and smiled. Arina opened the door and saw stairs that were leading upwards towards the attic.

Both girls went to investigate where the stairs led to, Arina turned the knob very slowly so as not to make a noise just in case someone was in the room! The door knob rattled a little and as she turned, the door was opening, there was a whooshing noise that rushed clean air into the loft! All of a sudden the room seemed to groan and then lit up and smelt so fresh and both girls rushed over to the window and saw grandpa still washing his car! They looked around the room and saw a big heavy chest over in the corner covered in cobwebs and dust they both went over to investigate! Dasha tried to open the lid but couldn’t budge it then Arina gave it a big push, suddenly the lid flew open and a bright light sprinkled gold flakes over the room, all of a sudden the room had disappeared and in its place was a bench on the hill, there was a lovely smell of grass and fluffy clouds floating by. The girls now very excited looked into the big case and pulled out some old clothes one pair of striped socks, two gold speckled dress’s, two black tea-shirts and two weird looking black hats oh and one pair of arm length pink gloves and a pink sash with a bow on it!

The girls hurriedly changed clothes, Arina wore the socks, dress, tea-shirt, pink gloves that reached up to her elbows, she then put her hair in a bun and put the black hat on, wow she looked a scary sight but she also looked cute in a way.Dasha had no socks to put on or any pink gloves, so she put on the skirt and black tea-shirt and tied the pink sash around her waist it looked nice with the bow, a double WOW, WOW these two young ladies now looked like the fairytale Sorcerer’s! As soon as the hats went on a shudder came over them, then a fantastic feeling of power came over them too! The girls saw lots of Wooden Tracks in a pile, so they both decided to build a train track. It took them hours they thought, as they had managed to lay the tracks all over the hills and across the dales it didn’t take them as long as they thought only because they were wearing their magical hats! After the girls had finished building the tracks they decided that they had earned a rest, so they found a park bench on the crest of a hill.

They both went over and sat down on the seat, Arina took off her left sock and draped it over the arm of the bench complaining it was too tight and that it hurt her toes, then she put her hands underneath her chin with a look of deep thought, now Arina always had a soft spot for steam trains and loved Thomas The Tank Engine she thought with a smile “wouldn’t it be lovely if a steam train come along our track just like Thomas” she then thought “no it won’t happen but wouldn’t it be nice if it did!” Dasha looks on playing with a wooden doll that she had found behind the bench all bound up with string. As Dasha was removing the string she said “He looks like Pinocchio but from now on I will call him Pinoch, then all of a sudden she shouts out making Arina Jump, “I think I saw him smile and wink his eyes at me!” Dasha couldn’t believe it ………. Was it true? she thought or did I imagine it? Dasha’s blonde hair had now come undone and fell down her left side.

All of a sudden there was a sound Woo Woo, Chuff Chuff Arina and Dasha looked at each other and turned round quickly, they saw a wooden steam train hurtling down the track towards them, steam coming out from the funnel. The girls jumped for joy it looked so big and so real! All of a sudden the train stopped near the bench, Dasha noticed a tear in Pinoch’s eye, she wiped the tear away and Pinoch gave a little grin,Dasha shouted to Arina “Pinoch has come to life, quick come and look!” The young girls looked at each other amazed as Pinoch had somehow come alive! A little voice said “Oh thank you so much for setting me free, I have been tied up with string and I have been behind the bench for a long, long time and you came by and saved me!”

The girls still amazed that Pinoch could talk, they asked him where do you come from? Where do you live?” Pinoch replied “I live right over there in Wood Town” pointing over to the hills, “My friends and I were playing and we play tie up and we have to roll down the hill! Unfortunately there was a big wind and I got blown from down the valley and up the dales and I landed here, it’s a good job the bench had stopped me rolling over to the next hill, I don’t know where I am really, can you help me please to get back home?” Arina and Dasha looked at each other and thought, and thought with their imaginations working, they both looked at the train and went to see the driver. Unfortunately there wasn’t any driver all that was in the train cab was a note and two buttons, one being green for “On” and the other being red for “Off” there was a dial to put in your destinations and also a chord for the whistle too.

Well the girls said to Pinoch we will have to try it and see what happens so they all get on board feeling excited with their new friend and new adventure! Pinoch put in the destination Wood Town and Arina pressed the green button and the train started up and began to increase in speed. Dasha pulled the chord for the whistle the train was getting up to speed and the smoke was coming from the funnel. Over the dales and over the hills they went they saw wooden ladybirds and wooden mice and a wooden farmer on his wooden tractor waving. They finally arrived in Wood Town, Dasha pressed the red button and the train slowed right down and stopped, they were greeted by a big crowd of wooden people, clapping their hand and jumping for joy. The girls had brought their friend Pinoch back home!
A wooden helicopter flew by very low and the pilot shouted “Thank goodness you have found our friend we thought we had lost him for sure, I have been searching for him for weeks! Pinoch jumped off the train and shouted thank you to the girls.
Dasha looked at the dial in the cab and put in “Park Bench” and Arina pressed the green button for go! The train started to move and the girls waved at all the people and shouted goodbye, they saw Pinoch who was running after the train shouting for joy as he blew them a kiss to say thank you and farewell. Arina pulled the chord and the train whistled as it sped away from Wood Town! Over the hills and down the dales they went. It seemed a long journey but didn’t they have some fun?

The train came up towards the top of the hill and they could see the park bench, Dasha pressed the red button and the train slowed down and stopped. The girls got off the train and stretched right out as it had been a long journey. They sat on the bench and Arina said to Dasha “ Do you know what we have done today?” Dasha replied “Yes we have built a train track all around this beautiful countryside, and I found Pinoch and took all that string off him, we caught the train and took him home to Wood Town, on the way we saw a wooden mouse, a wooden ladybird, a wooden farmer on his wooden tractor, we saw a wooden helicopter and loads of wooden people too, we have done a lot in one day haven’t we?”
Arina replied “Yes we have, but isn’t it funny because it was like a magical mystery tour we did and I think it is something to do with when we opened that large trunk in Grandpa’s attic there was gold flakes floating around and the room changed into hills and dales and we put the hats on and we shuddered I think they have turned us both into Sorcerer’s!

“Oh heck” shouts Arina, “it’s Grandpa, he’s shouting us,” the girls took off their hats and as soon as they did the hills and dales had disappeared altogether and they were back in Grandpa’s attic. “Girls are you up there?” “Yes Grandpa” the girls shouted back and quickly undressed and put their own clothes back on. They looked out of the little window in the attic and saw Grandpa outside just finishing washing his car. As they closed the door behind them the room creaked back to it’s normal state, dusty and their was no evidence that the girls had ever been in there!

The girls went outside to Grandpa’ and gave him a huge hug and kiss, Grandpa said “Have you been playing nicely girls?” they answered back “Yes Grandpa we have!”
“Good” Grandpa replied “Guess what girls? We are going to see your Mum in hospital and your baby brother too!”

The girls jumped up and down they were so pleased that Mum was alright and that they had a baby brother too. The girls gave Grandpa a big hug and a kiss, Grandpa was leaking as a little tear came from Grandpa’s eyes because he was so happy and loved his family!

Two Young Sorceres's belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, Bits and Pieces , Collaboral Damage, Core [C.O.R.E], Dimensions, Featured Features - For Featured Art, Photography, T-Shirts, Writing, First Things, Freedom In Words & Art, Freedom to Shine, in-between, Myths, Legends and Fairytales, The X - Human Sentiment and Two Beings Group
Two Young Sorceres's  by silverstrummer -  David Everitt
Two Young Sorceres's  by silverstrummer -  David Everitt
  • CanDuCreations

    CanDuCreations

    Excellent and adorable work

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much but most of all to AnnMie for her beautiful photograph.
    We are both glad that you have enjoyed this first attempt! – David :>))

  • AnnMei

    AnnMei

    wonderful story!
    Thank you:)))

  • silverstrummer... replied

    And Thank You my friend without your artwork this story would not have happened ….... Congratulations to you on “Our Story” – David :>))

  • Larry Davis

    Larry Davis

    Witchy – poo reborn…
    I love it.
    Brilliant.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank you Larry I’m / we are glad that you liked it …........ thanks for your comments! David :>))

  • Romo

    Romo

    excellent story and collab with this wonderful image:)

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You Robbin for your help and support making this come to fruition, glad that you liked it too!
    Take Care – David :>))

  • Adam Gormley

    Adam Gormley

    Beautifully composed image mate, well done :)

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi Adam thank you for your kind coments glad that you liked it your comments are apreciated!
    - David :>))

  • Anthea  Slade

    Anthea Slade

    Perfect partnership between this gorgeous image and your wonderful short story…these two go so beautifully together as if they were a hand in a glove. Gorgeous work David.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow thank you Anthea I’m taken aback with your lovely comments I’m so glad that you liked it too and on behalf of Ann I thank you too! – David :>))

  • handprintz

    handprintz

    Fabulous image and a wonderful story which held my interest all the way through, fabulous collab David and AnnMei

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Wow thank you Trudi I feel very humble in what you have said .. lovely comments …. I wouldn’t have done the story really if it hadn’t been for Ann …...... I just commented that the picture could tell a tale and she threw it back to me and said she would love to read it and that’s it. My first time to write a story really I found it quite hard …........ but I soon reverted back to when I was young and went from there. Thanks for your support it is truly appreciated! – David :>))

  • littlestmonkey

    littlestmonkey

    This is adorable….absolutely intriguing and captivating…..Beautifully written!
    Why don’t you try your hand at writing short stories for magazines, or stories for children?
    Love it….thanks for sharing….and the artwork is stunning…..well done both of you:)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much for your comments and support …......... I must admit I enjoyed the challenge to do something like this … so maybeee ??
    - David :>)) and on behalf of AnnMei I thank you too!

  • Shadowdreamer

    Shadowdreamer

    Wonderful image and story well done, great work from both of you

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Shadowdreamer (love the name) Thank you so much for your comments they are so very much appreciated! On behalf of AnnMi I thank you also! (you must see her work if you have the time! – David :>))

  • Teresa P. Pelaez

    Teresa P. Pelaez

    Wonderful David, you both did a fantastic work!

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank you Teresa for your supportive comments always and on behalf of AnnMei I thank you too!
    Take Care – David :>))

  • buzzy

    buzzy

    very pretty.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You buzzy for your comment its very much appreciated I/we are very pleased that you liked it! Thank You for your support! – David :>))

  • adgray

    adgray

    BRILLIANT!!!!
    Great story and very well set up for the illustration!
    B R A V O !!!

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank You so much adgray for your supporting comments they are most welcomed and on behalf of AnnMei I thank you also! – David :>))

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    wow thays a LONG story…lol 2 much 4 me 2 read..but a cute photo..those clouds look real !! exellent work David. :)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Lol … sorry Lazydaze there was so many items in the picture .. I used in the story it is a little too long for RB but maybe not for a short story book!
    The clouds do look real it’s a great piece of art work but unfortunately it doesn’t belong to me … it belongs to AnnMei so the accolade is really hers, she has some good art and definately worth a visit to her page!
    Thanks for your support mate I appreciate it! On behalf of AnnMei I thank you too! – David :>))

  • Viona Pfeiffer

    Viona Pfeiffer

    Whoa, this is soooo gorgeous… you are amazing silverstrummer!

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi surfsweet (nice name) – Thank you so much for your lovely comments they are very much appreciated. I’m not that amazing if at all but thanks for the compliment! I wouldn’t have been able to write the story without the artwork from AnnMei …....... well worth a visit to her page her work is beautiful! Thank you on behalf of AnnMei we are glad that you like it. Thank You – David :>))

  • Ghelly

    Ghelly

    A.M.A.Z.I.N.G , Ijust can say WOW…..instant fav.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank you Ghelly I’m very pleased that you liked it and thank you for favourite too…... your comments are most welcome!
    - David :>))

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Hallo David…
    I wonder why you do not post more visual work….
    But I have enjoyed so much this one…
    Is perfect…!!!!
    And t have all the elments that I adore…the wooden toyes… the fluffy clouds… the rounded hills and atmosphere of dream… the tow litle sisters… discovering what is behind their own soul… and how they can convey the dream and reality… into something quite different..
    Precious..
    Rosa

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Bless you Rosa you say the most beautiful things in your comments and your writing! I am honoured that you have left a comment. The visual is by AnnMei you must pay her a visit she has done some wonderful work! I am going to try soon with my own visuals I hope. Thank you Rosa for your kind comments they are so valued! – David :>))

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    Adorable girls and story!! are the twins?

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You for your comment I’m not sure whether they are twins there certainly is a likeness between them …........... their names are the same in the story! I am not sure whether they are AnnMei children, you must visit her page if you have the time. Your support is always welcomed!
    - David :>))

  • RosaCobos

    RosaCobos

    Oh…. then… I had understood on the other way around…!
    Well… the story is great and the visual is great…
    And share art is a gift for both artists and for us all… congratulations to both.. I will visit her, no doubt.!!!! seems so promising”“
    Hope to see your “visuals”.... soon.
    Rosa

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks Rosa for those comments too …. and thank you for favouring this work! – David :>))

  • linifer

    linifer

    Excellent writing and image! Brilliant work. Hugz oxo

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you linifer for your welcomed comments I’m very pleased that you liked our work please pay a visit to AnnMei she is a great artist you will enjoy her work! Thanks for your support! – David :>))

  • Rhenastarr

    Rhenastarr

    Beautiful story and creation.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Rhenastarr – Thank you for your lovely comments they are so welcomed the image is from AnnMei you may like to see what artwork she can do if you have the time to! Thank you also for your support and for favouring this work! On behalf of AnnMei I thank you also! – David :>))

  • Sharon Mau

    Sharon Mau

    I love the story and the image is creative, inspirational and fascinating!! Beautiful work!
    Congratulations on your wonderful feature in Dimensions

  • Nat Hall

    Nat Hall

    great story and wicked image, silver! :))))))

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You so much Nat for your lovely comments they are truly appreciated. I’m glad that you liked the story but the image was done by AnnMei if you have the time please see her work, in fact if you go to the top of the comments you will see her and just click on her! I shall Thank You on behalf of Ann too for your comments! – David :>))

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Wow Thank You so much Sharon I feel so humble with your comments and with the feature too. I wouldn’t have been able to do the story without AnnMei so I thank you on behalf of Ann for this wonderful accolade, Thank You! – David :>))

  • valzart

    valzart

    Aww this is just stunning work sweetheART ;} happy hippy hugglez

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Val for your kind comments and support I’m glas that you liked it. – David :>))

  • Maria  Moro

    Maria Moro

    A wonderful & creative masterpiece,, very well set up ,,, congratulations this is something to be proud of,,,cheers

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Maria for your lovely comments and support they are so much appreciated!
    I cannot take all the credit as AnnMei did the artwork, if you have the time it is well worth a look you will be impressed!
    - David :>))

  • Dream Vision Images

    Dream Vision I...

    wow! this is different, well done!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Nice to meet you too Erika and thank you for dropping by and leaving your comments which are greatly appreciated. I am pleased that you have liked our story! – David :>))

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Sorry I forgot to say thank you also on behalf of AnnMei – David :>))

  • Ellen

    Ellen

    Very beautifully done!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Ellen for your kind comments I really do appreciate that you have viewed our work and I am pleased that you liked it! Thank you too on behalf of AnnMei!
    - David :>))

  • Sheila Laurens

    Sheila Laurens

    Wonderful writing and lovely image (AnnMei) – good collaboration – well done David X

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Sheila Thank You for stopping by and leaving a comment it is much appreciated! I’m glad that you liked our story and image – I thank you also on behalf of AnnMei too – David :>))

  • Antanas

    Antanas

    lovely work

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You so much Antanas beautiful comments from such an artist/maestro as yourself is deemed to be a reward. Your comments are always welcomed and very much appreciated.
    - David :>))

  • Svetlana Sewell

    Svetlana Sewell

    WOW, That is a stunning portrait of these girls Dave.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks the artwork belongs to a fellow Russian called AnnMei if you have time to see her work you will not be dissapointed. The story was of my doing! Thank you for popping in and leaving your kind comments!
    - David :>))

  • Krys Bailey

    Krys Bailey

    Hahaha! Wonderful image!!! Cute and very professionally done!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You for your comments it was a collaboration the artwork was by AnnMei and the story by myself. I’m glad that you liked it! – David :>))

  • invisible

    invisible

    JUST WONDERFUL !;-)))))))))) GREAT ARTWORK !

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you its a collaboration with AnnMei and myself Ann did the artwork …..... if you have the time please see her work! On behalf of Ann and myself we thank you for your comments. They are very much appreciated! – David :>))

  • Wendy  Slee

    Wendy Slee

    What a delightful story…....... the image is beautiful too.
    Together they speak of the young at heart and all the wonderful things that imagination can evoke…....

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You so much Wendy I’m very pleased that you liked this collaboration your comments are so much appreciated! Take Care
    - David :>))

  • David Parkin

    David Parkin

    Both image and writing is excellent.

    Well done both very talented people. :-)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You David I feel very humble with what you have said. I/we are very pleased that you liked our work so much! Your comments are so much appreciated. – David :>))

  • Martina Ströbel

    Martina Ströbel

    amazing work! its truly beautiful!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Martina – Thank You for your kind comments they are so much appreciated thank you for your support too. On behalf of AnnMei I thank you also! – David :>))

  • Carol Barona

    Carol Barona

    wonderful work = this is so adorable. Great story

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Carol for your comments and support they are very much appreciated. We are pleased that you enjoyed our collaboration.
    - David :>))

  • Steven  Sandner

    Steven Sandner

    Great processing! charming work mate!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Steven – Thanks for dropping by and leaving your comments I’m glad you liked this collaboration the artwork was done by AnnMei if you have the time to see her work you won’t be dissapointed. – David :>))

  • janfoster

    janfoster

    lovely work and great little story : )

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Ian – Thank you for your kind comments I’m pleased that you liked our collaboration.- David :>))

  • IRISHPIX

    IRISHPIX

    I have to say you do marvellous creations

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi IRSHPIX (great name) Thank you for your kind comments … it was a collaboration with AnnMei who did the artwork … her site is well worth visiting if you have the time! – David :>))

  • Faizan Qureshi

    Faizan QureshiAll Rounder

    Ooooh this is absolutely wonderful!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Faizan for your lovely comments …......... I’m very pleased that you liked our collaboration – David :>))

  • Hans Goepel

    Hans Goepel

    Beautifully composed image mate, well done :)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Hans for your welcomed comments I’m glad that you like our collaboration too. on behalf of AnnMei I thank you also – David :>))

  • Barbara A. Boal

    Barbara A. Boal

    Wonderful story!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks BarbaranI’m very pleased you liked it and made a comment.
    – David :>))

  • jdmphotography

    jdmphotography

    Excellent work ! ……..

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you for paying a visit and leaving your comments, so much appreciated – David :>))

  • Paul Thompson Photography

    Paul Thompson ...

    excellent image

  • silverstrummer... replied

    I’m very pleased that you liked the story and image. It was a collaboration between myself and AnnMei it was Ann who did the image. Thanks for leaving your comment too its very much appreciated. – David :>))

  • LjMaxx

    LjMaxx

    Love the image & the story.. Delightful~

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much for your kind comments I’m really pleased you enjoyed our collaboration. On behalf of AnnMei I thank you also. – David :>))

  • sendao

    sendao

    amazing work!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi sendao – Thanks for coming by and leaving your comments it is appreciated. On behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You! – David :>))

  • Nigdaw

    Nigdaw

    I always look at the work of people who leave comments about my pictures. This was a real treat and unexpected. Thanks for a good read and a brillint picture. Now my favourite.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you for your very kind comments I feel quite humble, I’m very pleased that you liked our collaboration and I also Thank You on behalf of AnnMei. Thanks also for the favourite too it’s appreciated! – David:>))

  • Little Rascals Studio

    Little Rascals...

    WOW this is some stunning work! love the details…the sock..her looking up…the pink gloves and all those little toys arounf. I am amazed…very well done silverstrummer

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow such a stunning comment! – Hi susanne – I’m very pleased that you liked my collaboration with AnnMei, her artwork is fantastic and worth a look if you have the time. On behalf of AnnMei and myself Thank You for your lovely comments it is so much appreciated! – David :>))

  • dawndavies

    dawndavies

    aww such a cute picture,dawn

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Dawn – Thank you for your comment …... AnnMei was the artist who did the image …......... On behalf of Ann I Thank you also. – David :>))

  • Stephen Thomas

    Stephen Thomas

    Very cute and very well done photo!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Stephen – Thank You for leaving your kind comments they are very much apptreciated, ……...... On behalf of AnnMei I Thank you also. – David :>))

  • Pip Gerard

    Pip Gerard

    how wonderful. I love it!! wha a collaboration!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Pip – Thanks you do much for your kind comments …..... I’m really pleased that you like our collaboration. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also. Your comments are very much appreciated. – David :>))

  • linaji

    linaji

    Wow this story and the illustration go hand in hand.. Congrats to BOTH!! YOU ROCK!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You so much for your kind comments and support too on behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also …....she is a great artist worth a visit to her page!
    - David :>))

  • linaji

    linaji

    she is on my watchlist David.. so good of you to highlight a fellow artist!!

  • kimie

    kimie

    Great writing David, lovely read x

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Kimie for your nice comments I do appreciate them … I’m pleased that you liked it and on behalf of AnnMei I thank you also!
    - David :>))

  • linifer
  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks so much for all your support it means alot and I thank you also on behald of AnnMei too ….... your comments are always welcomed
    - David :>))

  • SharonD

    SharonD

    Wonderful story and picture David.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You also Sharon for your comments and support . truly appreciated and I thank you also on behalf of AnnMei too! – David :>))

  • Pip Gerard
  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Wow Pip Thank You so much on behalf of AnnMei I thank you also! We are thrilled to bits with our features for this work. Thank You for your support too …... it is so much appreciated! – David :>))

  • mab03

    mab03

    Such a great image. Great all tha way around!! It deserves to be featured…...Congrats again

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thanks Marcia your very qick at getting around!! Your comments are very welcomed my friend on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • mindylynn

    mindylynn

    This is so trippy, like woooooow! I would love to see more of your work, this is gorgeous and something about it draws me in but I don’t know what! It almost looks like… plastic? It’s awesome!

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi Mindylynn – Glad you liked our collaboration now if your talking about the artwork you should see AnnMei works you will be impressed by it. .......................Now if your talking about my writing then I think plastic doesn’t come into it! Lol …...........Thanks for your comments and on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • CLiPiCs

    CLiPiCs

    Simply wonderful david

    the story and the image !

    Bravo

    Love ‘N’ Laughter Kriss

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Kriss for your great comments they are appreciated we are very pleased that you liked our collaboration! On behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • Madeline M  Allen

    Madeline M Allen

    Just outstanding! Well done on both David!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Madeline – Thank You for your kind comments they are very much appreciated. On behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • izzybeth

    izzybeth

    how adorable!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi izzybeth – Thank You for your kind comment I’m very pleased that you liked it, On behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • Scott  d'Almeida

    Scott d'Almeida

    fantastic work.perfect;

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Scott – Thank You for your comment it is very much appreciated I’m pleased that you like it and on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • Patricia Anne McCarty

    Patricia Anne ...

    NICE works :)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Patricia – Thanks for the visit and leaving your compliment it is very much appreciated – and on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • Mugsy

    Mugsy

    Beautiful work!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Johan – Thanks for stopping by and leaving your comment it is very much appreciated – and on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too!
    – David :>))

  • Al Neaimi

    Al Neaimi

    stunning work , the story and the image , well done to both of you.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Al – Thank You for your kind comments they are really appreciated –
    and on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too! – David :>))

  • Marlo11

    Marlo11

    Just adorable. Great collaboration. Can’t wait for the sequel!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Marlo – Thanks for your lovely comments they are so much appreciated. mmmmmmm sequel That might be another story? – David :>))

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Sorry but I forgot to say on behalf of AnnMei I also Thank You too!
    – David :>))

  • LudaNayvelt

    LudaNayvelt

    charming

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much I’m pleased that you liked our collaboration and thank you also for the favourite too! On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also!
    – David :>))

  • Aimelle

    Aimelle

    such an adorable composition ! and I love the tones… wonderful work

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You Aimelle for your comments and support we are so pleased you liked the collaboration! On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also!
    – David :>))

  • Evita

    Evita

    Beautful image and work !!!Congrats on your feature !! :D

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Evita – Nice to meet you – Thanks for your comments they are very much appreciated I’m glad that you enjoyed our collaboration. – David :>))

  • KiimiG

    KiimiG

    great work!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi KiimiG – Thanks for popping in and leaving a comment it is so much appreciated Thank You I’m glad that you liked our collaboration, On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • Cliff Vestergaard

    Cliff Vestergaard

    Magic work !

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Cliff – Thank you for your comment its most welcomed and appreciated we are pleased that you like our collaboration! On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • Sarah Pett-Noble

    Sarah Pett-Noble

    This is amazing, straight to my favourites :o)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Sarah – We are glad that you liked our collaboration and made it your favourite too. Thank you so much for your lovely comments. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • Kasey Cline

    Kasey Cline

    WOW This is sooooo cool….Well done to the two of you!!! Amazing piece. Love the story!

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Thank you Kasey we are both pleased you liked this collaboration – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • LoneAngel

    LoneAngel

    wonderful photo .. love it

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Angel I’m glad that you liked the image it was done by AnnMei it was a collaboration between us. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • emolena

    emolena

    WONDERFUL !!! my CONGRATULATIONS !!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Grazyna – Thank you so much for your lovely comments they are appreciated very much! – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    awesome! huggles

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Ushner we are pleased you liked our collaboration – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • fullcirclemandalas

    fullcirclemand...

    Love this! story, art, everything! Great collab!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you so much for your wonderful comments we are both pleased that you like this. – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Clare Colins

    Clare Colins

    A beautiful image. Congratulations on the ‘feature’ :)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you the Image was from AnnMei – Thank you for your compliments – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Sheila Laurens

    Sheila Laurens

    Congrats on THIS!!!! feature. [tut] lol
    seriously…. brilliant David XXX

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Sheila I appreciate your comments and a [tut] Lol I appreciate your input. – David

  • silverstrummer... replied

    On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • Ghelly

    Ghelly


    You have being Featured in the...
    First Things Group

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow thank you so much for the feature we both appreciate it very much – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • joyousmoon

    joyousmoon

    Great one! Congratulations on your feature!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Pamela – Thanks for your comments they are appreciated – David

  • silverstrummer... replied

    OOPs I forgot to say On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also!
    – David :>))

  • IngerMargrete

    IngerMargrete

    Very nice work, excellent details with all the different toys in the image!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Inger I’m pleased that you like the story and image. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • ANNETTE HAGGER

    ANNETTE HAGGER

    Very creative…congrats on feature…anna : )

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Annette – firstly my apologies for not answering your comments of 3 days ago, I was unaware of it! Thank you so much on you kind comments they are appreciated so much. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • reflector

    reflector

    A stunning fantasy portrait ! Very nice capture, great processing and collaboration.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi reflector – Thank you very much for your comments we are very pleased that you liked our collaboration. On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David :>))

  • maxy

    maxy

    So cute!!!! Pure magic throughout – their expressions are perfect! This is fantastic!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank You maxy I’m very pleased that you like this your comments are very much appreciated – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • missmoneypenny

    missmoneypenny

    What an excellent collaboration – lovely work

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi missmoneypenny -Thank you for stopping by and leaving your comments …. it is very much appreciated. I’m pleased also that you liked our work and collaboration too – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Lorena Maria

    Lorena Maria

    David this is so gorgeous!!! i love it.. Many congrats on your features!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Lorena – Thank you so much I appreciate your comments and I’m pleased you like this collaboration too – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • BLYTHART

    BLYTHART

    You have delightful imagination and I think it was really clever the way you wove a story from AnnMei’s picture. It is easy to read too, which is often a difficult task for an author to achieve.

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Wow Dave Thank you I feel very humbled with your comments …. it was my first attempt of a collaboration I’m so pleased you liked this!
    I appreciate your support very much thanks Dave! On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • ElYPares

    ElYPares

    I love this. We are all little witches.L.O.L.

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi ElYPares – Thank you for dropping in to leave your kind comments Lol I’m sure you all are nice little witches!! I’m pleased you enjoyed this collaboration and thank you for the fav. too very much appreciated – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Samuel Vega

    Samuel Vega

    I love this photo and the story…

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Samuel – I’m very pleased that you liked the image and story, this was my first collaboration with a lady from Russia which seems to be very popular I am amazed at the interest – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • helene ruiz

    helene ruiz

    truly i enjoyed this story and imagry! wonderful!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Helene – I’m so pleased you liked the collaboration thank you for leaving your kind comments – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Junior Mclean

    Junior Mclean

    Excellent scene !

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Junior – Thanks for passing by and leaving your comment I’m pleased you liked the scene You must visit AnnMei – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Carol Berliner

    Carol Berliner

    Pure magic!! Perfect!! Instant fav!! I looooooove it!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Carol – Thanks so much for your comments and the fav. too they are very much appreciated. I’m very pleased that you liked this collaboration …... it has been quite popular on RB – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • AnnDixon

    AnnDixon

    This is fabulous work,

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Ann – Thank you for stopping by and leaving your kind comments they are very much appreciated. I’m very pleased that you liked the collaboration – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • josiem

    josiem

    amazing work!!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi josiem – Thank you for dropping in and leaving your kind comments they are very much appreciated! – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • julie08

    julie08

    wonderful work:)

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Julie – and welcome thank you so much for stopping by and leaving your comment it is very much appreciated! Thank You – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • ElohiAdanata

    ElohiAdanata

    That is so beautiful!!!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Elohi – Welcome to RedBubble my friend and thank you also for viewing and commenting an this collaboration your views are very much appreciated too – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • mltrue

    mltrue

    wonderful work! Great story, too!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Michelle – Thank you for your kind comments and for taking the time to read the story too! I appreciate it very much, I’m pleased that you liked this collaboration too! – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    this is awesome david !!! love it .. great work here

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you Shoaib I really appreciate you kind comments and it was a good collaboration with AnnMei – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • Luci Mahon

    Luci Mahon

    This is fantastic David!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Luci – Thank you for your lovely comment I’m very pleased you liked our collaboration – On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

  • nishagandhi

    nishagandhi

    very cute shot

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Hi Nisha – Thanks for popping in and leaving your comment – the artwork was done by Annmei and it was a collaboration of a story and art! Sorry for the long delay in my reply – David

  • Devalyn Marshall

    Devalyn Marshall

    This is so beautiful and ohhh so cute!

  • silverstrummer... replied

    Thank you also Devalyn for your lovely comments and for taking the time to look through some of my works. This was a collaboration between AnneMei so On behalf of AnnMei I Thank You also! – David

Add your comment

You need to login or signup to add your comment to this work.