Surf

silvercircles
Author: silvercircles
Word Count: 58
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Surf

This a carefree bit of writing I did after going on oneword, a writing prompt site (www.oneword.com). It isn’t really a poem or a piece of prose but what some call a prose poem.

His hair is slicked down with salty spray as his board cuts through the wild waves dancing toward shore. The wave he rides heightens and then crashes, booming down to swallow him whole. But a moment later, the board bobs gently to the surface. He comes up, spluttering, hair plastered to his sunburned forehead, ready to ride again.

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    Nice paragraph with a lot of feeling and describing words ; )

  • silvercircles replied

    Thanks! Glad you liked it!

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    wow that was quick hehe…your welcome

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