At Heaven's Gate

Author: silentcries
Word Count: 224
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At Heaven's Gate

i initially posted this as a journal over at my frozenfa gallery.. but i realised that when there’s too many journal, it’ll go missing from your profile.. and for some reason.. i don’t wish this piece to go “missing”.. So i’d like to share this piece to everyone once again. I hope it’s good enough to be posted as a writing.. It’s kinda like a lyric.. Inspired by a malay song, Di Pintu Mahligai (At the Palace’s Gate), by an old malay band, iklim.

Wrote this 9 Sep 2006.. i dedicate this to a friend i’ve lost, Brown..

i also noticed that one of my drawing posted at Frozenfa, seems to be inspired by this piece.. Aishiteru!

At Heaven's Gate belongs to the following groups:

All Out Emotion, Artists with Disabilities, Deep Within, Music Inspired Art (M.I.A) music links/lyrics required, Singapore, The Healing Journey and Voices of the Dark and the Deep

My world turn silent,
Since the day you left.
And the pain is killing me slowly,
Each time i recall the day i couldn’t find you,
And i remember the night we last met..

You were so possessive,
So unwilling to leave,
So unwilling to let me go..
You told me your fears,
I felt it, yet i brush it off..

I won’t forget your voice,
Asking me to stay..
I won’t forget the look in your eyes,
Telling me “don’t go…”

Now with my imaginary wings,
I wish i could fly over to you,
To tell you how much i love you,
To tell you how much i miss you..

I scream to the gates of heaven,
Can you hear me, my friend?
I scream for you to take me with you,
To free me from this pain..

I scream to the gates of heaven,
I need to see your face again,
I need to hear your voice again,
To tell me that everything is alright,
That you’ll always be here with me..

I scream to the gates of heaven,
Can you hear me, my friend?
Will you wait for me by the bridge?
I need to see you for one last time,
To tell you my love,
To tell you my goodbyes..

i miss you..

~fa

yanmos

...no words
silentcries replied

hugs~ X)
Karin Taylor

....i agree with yannis….....
hugs for you fa xoxoxoxoxo
silentcries replied

nyaaa… Hugssssssssssss~ X)
thank you for the fav, you and Yannis.. X)
barnsis

(*) just a hug.
silentcries replied

thank you!! love hugs~ X)
CateTownsend

hugs from me too Fa oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
silentcries replied
TheWanderingBoo

I could feel my own pain, of when my son died at birth, in this beautiful poetry…thankyou for sharing…
silentcries replied

i’m sorry for your pain..
but thank you, Boo.. thank you for your lovely writings too~ hugs..