Dear Angel, Get Well Soon!

silentcries
Author: silentcries
Word Count: 131
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Dear Angel, Get Well Soon!

Inspired from: Even Angels Get The Blues By Karin Taylor

Even angels get the blues.. when they do, what can we mere mortals do to help them? is there a way to reach them, to hold them, to hug them, to tell them that they’re loved and cherished?

if only humans and angels can touch, i’d love to hug my angel and tell her “thank you, thank you, thank you”.. i do 101 things just to make my angel smile and shine once again~ what will you do?

Dear Angel, Get Well Soon! belongs to the following groups:

All Out Emotion, Artists with Disabilities, Deep Within, Singapore, The Healing Journey and Voices of the Dark and the Deep

Dear Angel,
it’s been hard on you..
i’m sorry you’re feeling down
please don’t cry, dear angel..

i wish there is something i can do for you
anything to get rid of this blues
i wanna make you smile
just like you always do..

dear angel, i wish you’ll feel better soon
i wish you’ll smile and shine soon
for my happiness is meaningless
when my angel is all sad and blue..

oh how i wish i have wings,
i’d fly over to you this instant..
i’d bake you a cake, gluten free and all
with lots of chocolate toppings and icings and more!

dear angel, hope you’ll get well soon
or i’ll steal some wings and fly to you~! ^ _ ^

  • Cvail73

    Cvail73

    Beautiful Fa!! :O
    :)
    XXXXXhugsXXXX

  • silentcries replied

    eheh.. thank you, Christelle!!
    i just woke up and re-read it.. is it a lil cheesy? there’s like different feelings in there.. hehe.. i think that’s what happen when i got lost for words and am too worried to form coherent thoughts.. XD

  • barnsis

    barnsis

    Beautiful poem and it fits so well with Karin’s little angel.

  • silentcries replied

    Thank you, BarnSis! glad you like it.. am not really a writer, but i was lost last night and didn’t know what to say and i end up typing this.. hehe.. n_n”

  • Angela Harburn

    Angela Harburn

    Wonderful dearest Fa – Karin’s lovely little angel could not help but feel uplifted with all the kindness, and that cake, wow – could do with one of those myself!!! xxx Love you back with mega hugs! xxx

  • silentcries replied

    hehe.. i was actually wondering how on earth am i to bake a cake.. you wouldn’t want a cake i bake alright.. never baked one before.. but i can try!! hehehehe.. XD love mega hugs!!!

  • Jakki O

    Jakki O

    Great words :)

  • silentcries replied

    thank you, Jak! i just realised it was sorta cheesy and messy.. like.. something’s weird about it.. but am glad it’s gd enough to make a lil impact on someone.. hehe.. XD

  • Jodi Webb

    Jodi Webb

    That was so lovely and uplifting. Beautifully written.

  • silentcries replied

    any advice on the grammar or vocab? i haven’t been really writing proper english for years.. and am rusty to the max now.. lolz!! glad you like this still, Jodi!! =D

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    ..this is so very beautiful Fa…

    I saw it first thing when i woke up….
    I just really needed some time to let it sink in, and just absorb how very special it is….

    i know that feeling too, of wishing that friends (you especially) were up when i was up, and how hard it is when one of us is down, the best thing is that when one is up, it is then they are more able to reach out to the one who is down, and then sometimes that role reverses.

    The hardest thing of all is when two are down….it’s really difficult then…

    I am so happy that you are up, and all these beautiful gestures from you are bringing me back up….. I am so much better, except for all the extra happy tears you and Cate have made me cry… my eyelids are all swollen and shiny!!! and there is a river where my loungeroom used to be !!! lol

    thank you fa… you are just the best!!!
    love n glompz
    karin xoxoxox

    i love you fa!! and don’t know where I’d be or what I’d do without you, for you are as much a

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    ....the end of that was meant to say ‘for you are as much a friend and a light in the world, as i seem to be for you’..... i hope you realise :) xxx

  • silentcries replied

    The hardest thing of all is when two are down….it’s really difficult then…
    i agree, Karin!! i was thinking how lucky we are.. the timing is like just nice.. i was able to seat, then you lie down, i can still help pull you up.. hehe.. now we both must try stand up, ya! seating too long will lead to numb rear.. tatz no good.. X)
    am glad we can be there for each other, all of us, Karin!! let’s continue helping each other shine some light~! X)

  • Christine Jones

    Christine Jones

    lovely Fa! I am so glad that Karin has found this wonderful supportive community here and made some very special friends.

  • silentcries replied

    thank you, Christine! i’m glad Karin knows you too!! i’ve heard a lil about you, and am so glad to know that while i’m so far away, Karin will still have you near her! =D Hugs~!!! X)

  • Karin  Taylor

    Karin Taylorcommunity helper

    Fa, it’s perfect…nothing cheesy about it at all…. i love it so much!!!

  • silentcries replied

    i thought the 2nd and 3rd para was a lil retarded, no? maybe because i keep repeating the word smile? but that was the word that kept running through my head then.. i keep thinking, no point me happy if my fren not happy.. i want my fren happy, then i will feel happy~ n_n”

  • Jakki O

    Jakki O

    fa, anything from your heart is never cheesy :) !!

  • silentcries replied

    awww… thank you, JakkiO~

  • Cvail73

    Cvail73

    It’s not cheesy Fa! It’s absolutely beautiful!!!

    XXXXXXXX

  • silentcries replied

    it’s ok? hehe.. thanks, Christelle!! n_n”
    think if i change the 2nd smile to “rise” will it be ok? cos sorta.. the angel is feeling blue, feeling down.. am hoping she’ll pick herself up and feel better again.. =D

  • Cvail73

    Cvail73

    More than ok. you write incredibly well, the poem flows perfectly, and I love the fact bthat it is related to Karin’s painting!
    lol, that’s cracking play on words, lol, but I prefer cry :)))

  • silentcries replied

    aha~ sure you jest! XD thank you, Christelle! =D
    will ask Karin which she prefer.. hehe.. XD

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