Go Take A Hike!

shilohlin
Author: shilohlin
Word Count: 260
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Go Take A Hike!

Woke up this morning
wanting to be outdoors
so I picked a place
in the mountains to go

A sweet little trail
marked very well
I didn’t know
it would be such hell!

The sign said 2.3 miles
I looked at that and smiled
I can do this
nothing to it
let’s go into the wild

Weather so warm
a slight breeze to cool….

The scenary was awesome
things I didn’t know existed
camera at the ready
the wild life the landscapes
the incredible vistas

A wild bird chased me
I was too close to her nest
next thing I knew
I was wearing that mountain
on my chest

Fleaing the mad bird
I slipped and fell
slid down rock & mud
and some snow, ah hell
ripped my jeans
sprained a foot
the hip went out
there is a stain from the dirt

Crippled and wounded
[somewhat pissed]
I regained my composure
and grabbed my walking stick
With a definate limp
and a very slow gait
descended the trail
I need Advil !!
cant wait!

Telling this story
to a friend she replied
you nut was it worth it
will you do it again
some time

Well its all I can
think of to tell the truth
I will go back often
conquer that tiny part of earth

nothing can really stop us
if we want it badly enough
the muscles pain and ache
but not that much

tomorrow is another day
just wait it will be
and the photos will be posted
for everyone to see~

  • pixie3

    pixie3

    Lol I love this!! And I so can relate to this!!! I have so done that lol. Truly it is a wonderful composition.

  • shilohlin replied

    lol when it happens theres really nothing to do but laugh* but damn it hurts for a few days :) thanks for checking it out

  • hilarydougill

    hilarydougill

    Bless!! Hope you got some good shots after all of that. Wonderful poem!!! Great visual.

  • shilohlin replied

    thank you so much Hilary. I think the photos will portray an accurate story.
    I just love your comments. Love & Hugs to you*

  • Jan Landers

    Jan Landers

    dear, dear shilohlin…...you are blessed to have made such a hike with no water…thankfully it was not hot…. :) what an adventure!!! looking forward to the pics!!! :)

  • shilohlin replied

    I certainly like dear dear shiloh
    a lot more than you nutbag what were you thinking LOL But I get the point. It was extremely foolish to hike with no water and equally stupid to do it alone. Yes I was lucky and in light of all the related teachings I grew up with it is a blessing the way it turned out.

  • Jaybe

    Jaybe

    Get the pics up! Sounds like a complete adventure. Hope you’re ok!

  • shilohlin replied

    Im ok Jaybe. feeling a bit foolish about the whole thing {but man it was such a cool adventure] Thank You for the kindness*

  • Jan Landers

    Jan Landers

    i wouldn’t say ‘stupid’......just a bit carried away and not thinking about the physical world….. :) been there myself a few times…..just glad you brought away some powerful experiences and are ok….. ;)

  • shilohlin replied

    thank you my friend you are indeed kind

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    shilo after reading this you are the coolist dude around … just my sort of text … i wish i had been there with a camera when you ate that dirt … i bet the scenery is magical from there … conquer it soon and post the pics … cant wait to see’em x

  • shilohlin replied

    why thank you Dave! the scenary is magnificent. I hope to post some of the pics in the next couple of days.

  • SNAPPYDAVE

    SNAPPYDAVE

    cant wait to view them … keep on your feet in future ;-)

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