A Poem - Forget Me Not

Shannyn
Author: Shannyn
Word Count: 145
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A Poem - Forget Me Not

A Poem - Forget Me Not belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical

I watch the snowflakes kiss the windowpane,
Reflecting their lithe dance on your pale skin,
I feel a yearning as old as time as you relax against my side,
Your gentle eyelids flutter and betray the pulse of your dreaming.

The clock pumps out its rhythm and i am suddenly irate,
I used to like that sound, like heartbeats and melodies,
Now it sounds more like a funeral march,
Cat-like time stalks us, waiting to pounce unexpectedly,
I want to shake you and whisper urgently to you.

Instead i gaze at you intently, willing you to wake,
Sunlight struggles through the stain glass bluebird,
Dappled blue light dances across your chest,
I gaze into the blue world and watch the forget-me-nots struggle in the snow,
Please my love i must leave you now but when i too am sleeping;

FORGET ME NOT

  • Robert Knapman

    Robert Knapman

    This is wonderful. That last line sent shivers down my spine and into my toes. Thanks. By the way how could one attach a pic to jounal entries? I tried but it was huge.

  • Kimberley Gifford

    Kimberley Gifford

    Ah yes this poem took me away…and I felt every word as if they were my own.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    This is absolutely incredible..went strait to favs. Sally xxoo

  • Shannyn

    Shannyn

    Thanks guys – It’s so lovely to get feedback from such wonderful writers/artists etc …. I want to try and take some pics for this piece because i have stained glass bluebird at the top of the stairwell in the house i grew up and it’s divine… i will see how they turn out xo

  • lianne

    lianne

    Simply stunning Shannyn – moved me to tears because I think we’ve all been there if we’ve been lucky. Poetry at its best!

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