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I’ve played around with this again. Changed the layout and tried to get rid of some of the clutter the first one had. Do you think this one works better as a poster?

I would be really grateful for feedback :)

This is the prior version here

Thank you!

Hey guess what, this just got featured in The Graphic Room Group. Yay!

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vector, type, woman, female, male, new, illustrator, shakespeare, drama, beginner, shanmclean

Comments

  • kangarookid
    kangarookidabout 6 years ago

    as much as i liked the 1st poster, i think this looks better… mainly due to not feeling as cluttered, of course, i didn’t feel the 1st poster was cluttered until looking at it next to this poster =D…

  • that sounds like a positive thing… :) thanks!

    – shanmclean

  • Cate Townsend
    Cate Townsendabout 6 years ago

    Well I like a combination of both. I really like how this is more bold, but I also like the text in the background like you had it on the first image maybe you could lighten it I just liked the effect. I like the side panel on this one and maybe you could have the text as in the first but lighter and just on the white side behind her. Anyway I like them both. Good luck

  • thanks Cate! i’ll have a play around, I like your idea :)

    – shanmclean

  • jansnow
    jansnowabout 6 years ago

    Excellent Shan, I love this version!

  • thanks so much

    – shanmclean

  • reflector
    reflectorabout 6 years ago

    I like them both, but the second one is a cleaner layout. Great classy, design work !

  • thanks reflector! I was hoping to make this one cleaner

    – shanmclean

  • blamo
    blamoabout 6 years ago

    I like elements of both of them i would try and condense the text though Thumbs Up

  • thanks! when I printed this one out, I saw you were right about the text, although for some reason I couldn’t see it on screen :)

    – shanmclean

  • © Karin  Taylor
    © Karin Taylorabout 6 years ago

    wow, i still love the first one best shan!!
    the 2nd one is great too…but i love all the elements in the first one..and my eye travels right around in a big circle taking it all in.

  • thanks so much Karin. I really appreciate your feedback

    – shanmclean

  • blamo
    blamoabout 6 years ago

    Still a cracking design though

  • Mariaan M Krog Fine Art Portfolio
    Mariaan M Krog...about 6 years ago

    I love both! I agree with Cate though, adding the text you had in the first one, but making it much more transparent, will look good too! Congrats on having this featured! Great Job!

  • thanks so much Mariaan!

    – shanmclean

  • wse22
    wse22about 6 years ago

    nice vector ;)

  • Ange
    Angeabout 6 years ago

    hey there:)
    illustration of the original velvet gun shot looks great
    glad this was featured in the graphic room
    cheers

  • thanks so much Ange! really appreciate your input :)

    – shanmclean

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