The soft , almost invisible,
hairs on the back of my neck send delicious shivers down my spine,
exciting my body and mind,
the kisses you drop there moisten my secret place
and arouse my secret soul,
your fingers draw masterpieces on my body,
wetting my skin and my apetite,
the circles you draw become a magical spell…
that envelopes me in an unseeable cloak that hides my shameless passion …
I tumble helplessly into the night of your eyes
and find myself there in your heart,
held in the arms of the Angel who is watching with jealous pleasure
as my skin brings forth a shuddering explosion..
whilst you feast on my lust,
nibbling chunks out of me and devouring me at your will…
The aria of my triumph is only out-sung by your breathless cry…
a silent duet falls around us…
My Lust
Lust.. love…oh the power!
Samantha R, 7 months ago
Beautifully written Shall
Meach, 7 months ago
Your fingers draw masterpieces on my body – no they don’t they type masterpieces into Redbubble – top stuff Shall
Suzanne German, 7 months ago
far out! this is absolutely HOT! love it what passion! woah!
Jodi Tweed, 7 months ago
intense, very very intense lust.
Hoffard, 7 months ago
Wow! Speechless… La la love it!
Larry Varley, 7 months ago
A great passionate piece, thanks
ginnymac, 7 months ago
gee Shall, you live an interesting life…. Sigh ....wonderful writing.
Jen Whyte, 7 months ago
An absolute masterpiece! I am speechless ….
Magnetic, 7 months ago
WOW…...Very nice!
TabiBerkey, 7 months ago
ohhh…. shiver
Kristy Lee, 7 months ago
Oh my GODDESS…too freakin yummy.
Eddy1948, 7 months ago
very nice
Katseyes, 6 months ago
‘An unseeable cloak that hides my shameless passion’ how wonderful! ‘The angel with jealous pleasure’ what can I say x
shall in reply to Katseyes’s comment, 6 months ago
Don’t encourage me.. you know what I am like!!! ... Oh go on then.. Let me share my vision with you… well… lol next time!
Jaeda DeWalt, 5 months ago
I tremble helplessly into the night of your eyes <
—i LOVE this!Your words sent me soaring into a sinuous seduction . . .
wonderfully lost in a sea of your elegant lust and luscious love.
You invite lustral abstract visuals and sensual delights – a lovers sensorium.
You are a princess of passion and poetry.
Your ability to transport to fantastical realms with your words is just . . .
A M A Z I N G
shall in reply to Jaeda DeWalt’s comment, 5 months ago
Why Thank you Jaeda… Flattered I am!
shalayne, 3 months ago
amazing, intense, seductive, and most of all belivable
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