Wonderment
Sometimes what we are seeking was there all along.
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in the way you looked at me
your eyes glistening,
sensitive to the lens,
longing,
soft as a holy lake
caught unaware
in the hidden fold
of a virgin mountain?
What is it
in the way you moved
and caught your breath
as my hair
brushed your face?
Where was I
so wrapped up in myself
that I didn’t see you
till now?
I fell in love
with the perfect play
of your hands
touching my skin.
Forgive my boldness-
I am caught.
Give yourself to me.
Are you really here?
Druidstorm
Your words cast a beautiful image my friend! Bravo!!!...)o(
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you greatly Druid… so glad to see you on my page.
Cassey
...and caught your breath as my hair brushed your face... sigh. Missed your words!
ShadowDancer replied
missed you!
Leon Walker
Your work is always so beautifully intense…
ShadowDancer replied
i find all the elements in life so intense… then those feelings dance off my fingertips to the page.. thank you so much leon
linaji
I get the opportunity to say this again.. first of all.. I am so glad you are close once again and that I can feel the play and dynamic in your heART..
It is true that so many times what I wanted over..there is not ‘there’ but smack dab right here.. and now.. GIVE ME THAT LAST LINE…
Forgive my boldness-
I am caught.
Give yourself to me.
xoxXXX
ShadowDancer replied
i have so much to catch up on with your stuff, lina… you amaze me with your ability to continuously put out such intense and illuminate art, you’re an inspiration to me. xxx
silverstrummer...
Beautiful words of spoken softness, and of love, ............ boldly giving of yourself …......... such soulful words and feelings of self worth! Beautiful! – David
ShadowDancer replied
David.. thank you so much for your support and lovely comment… it means a great deal to me.
JennyMac
Just beautiful… as always… : )
ShadowDancer replied
Jenny.. than you so much xxxx
Sourav
Beautiful word flow… nicely done!
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you greatly Sourav, I appreciate that you took the time to read and comment.
Roger Sampson
ShadowDancer replied
Wow Roger – what a wonderful treat! I’m truly thankful.
AroonKalandy
Wonderful Sceanario…...........beautiful….......
ShadowDancer replied
Aroon, I cherish that you enjoyed it..
AroonKalandy
congrats on your feature,,,,,,,,,,,,
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you so much!
Judith Hayes
Beautifully visual! Congrats on the feature! ♥
ShadowDancer replied
Judith.. I always wanted to be a painter.. I suppose painting with words is the next best thing! Thank you truly.
Christie Moses
This is incredibly beautiful. Just magic….Love C
ShadowDancer replied
Christie, your comment filled me with warmth and pride. Thank you!
linaji
ShadowDancer replied
xxxx
Colin Mitchell...
Hi… obviously written from the heart and conveys something so intangibly precise..
ShadowDancer replied
Colin, I’m so glad you found this heartfelt.. as it was, but that doesn’t guarantee it comes across to the reader. Thank you.
silverstrummer...
Congratulations on both your features they are so well deserved – David
ShadowDancer replied
thank you thank you david… always unexpected surprises. :) hugs to your family.
Ushna Sardar
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you, thank you, with my heart.
Alison Pearce
Fantastic!!!
ShadowDancer replied
Alison, thank you so much!
Matt Roberts
Nice poem. Good flow.
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you Matt, I appreciate that!
RosaCobos
Perfect touch…
the one that leave a track of cold…
asif a soft and coll wind had opened the soul.
Rosa (beautiful moment…and beautiful questions)
ShadowDancer replied
Rosa, thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.. it is a poem in itself.
ricardo perez jr
now I love that
ShadowDancer replied
oh, thank you ricardo!
gretchen .
truly written like a dream, took my breath away… :-) xox
ShadowDancer replied
gretchen, you gem, i’m gong to wrap up this beautiful comment in a silk handkerchief with silver thread and place it in the pocket of my heart…
RosaCobos
Because the question will be answered by your own heart…and got it i your sweet inspiration this poem well deserves it.
Rosa
ShadowDancer replied
oh how super exciting! i’m so happy that i was able to get that message across – and thanks to your group for supporting the writers, too!!
Jack Grace
Sometimes what we most desire is right at our fingertips and you have expressed it most beautifully. Congratulations on the features.
Jack
ShadowDancer replied
you are so right about that Jack… sometimes we just have to open our eyes a little wider. thank you so much!
JaneSolomon
Beautiful! and congrats on all those features. xxxx
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you so much Jane.. it means a lot coming from you. xx
trwoody
Well, you don’t need my praise with this poem getting four features, but it is well deserved Paty Jo.
ShadowDancer replied
Tony – I might not ask for praise, but I definitely love seeing you on my pages… features or no features. thank you so much!
msdebbie 19 days ago
Such a sweet conclusion
Forgive my boldness -
I am caught.
Give yourself to me.
Are you really here?
ShadowDancer replied 19 days ago
awww, thanks so much debbie, i appreciate you!