postcard
sometimes people leave parts of themselves and we don’t know it until another lifetime
postcard belongs to the following groups:
All Out Emotion, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Freedom to Shine, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers and WMGIt had been missing for some time
a piece of me
so slight I had overlooked it for quite a while
until one day something dropped inside
and it echoed as it hit
full of hollowness
undefined
and in a rush, flashbacks
fragments of flavors
that I had forgotten
hand written tellings of moments
abandoned
but not erased
etched on the inside of my heart
left like a secret to myself
like a postcard that
slipped under a dresser
full of hellos and goodbyes and
i wish you were heres
all to be forgotten
until a rainy day
when I decided to look into the dark places
I had been ignoring
I found a piece of me
in the postcard you left
on the deepest part of my heart
Astoreth
“I found a piece of me
in the postcard you left
on the deepest part of my heart”
How utterly beautiful and achey. xxxx
ShadowDancer replied
thank you Jane.. hugs!
Lisa Jewell
Wow this is so very beautiful…
the imagery is perfect and heartfelt… xxx
ShadowDancer replied
thank you Lisa.. the image came first and then the words poured out. (hugs)
journey360
oh wow…a combination
of easy breezy and soft & beautiful writing
ShadowDancer replied
journey, such a wonderful comment, thank you.
Del Millar
full of feeling, how it tugs PJ to pop back into the moment again oxo
ShadowDancer replied
oh, thank you so much del, hugs to you!
Narcissus17
how many people might you have touched in such a way without realising it
ShadowDancer replied
amazing isn’t it? you just never know, really…
ShadowDancer replied
and thank you !
Rex Inkpen
beautifully composed, with a well set up conclusion
ShadowDancer replied
thank you so much rex, what a wonderful compliment… (love your new avatar)
adgray
STUNNING!
How could you not be featured for such excellent writing as this!
BRAVO!!!
ShadowDancer replied
oh, adgray, what a wonderful compliment! i thank you with all of me!
Genevieve Robey
Very clever and powerful.
ShadowDancer replied
genrobey, i’m humbled that you appreciate it. thank you!