brandy
brandy belongs to the following groups:
Complex Simplicity of Art, All Out Emotion, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Feminine Intent (LIMIT TWO IMAGES PER DAY), Freedom to Shine, Graphic Scratch, Live, Love, Dream: , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Moms 4 Art, Shameless Self-Promotion, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers and WMGTime will be taken
to darken the
pages of life
with my own blood
fresh from a pulsing vein i
will spill myself out in small
painful drops that drain my
soul
like pouring an old dusty bottle of
brandy into your sink
to be drunken by rats
BiographyofRed8
wow, this is raw stuffing type writing. i feel the bitterness seep through (((huggles)))
ShadowDancer replied
thank you so much Red.. life is raw.. always a source for inspiration of the dark and deep.
ArcadiaTempest
Oh…..gasp…......the imagery is so dark …....but has punch that I adore…..XXXX
ShadowDancer replied
AT… wow i made you gasp… that’s thrilling for me. thank you so much!
mstrace
great piece, very visceral and packed full of imagery. tough to do in such a tiny package. loved it!
ShadowDancer replied
thank you so much, and you used one of my favorite words: visceral. don’t you love taking a little box and seeing just how much you can squeeze inside it without smashing? i like to do that with writing too.. squeeze every word until it has been dripped dry..
mstrace
would also be a great little addition to the P&P group
ShadowDancer replied
thank you i shall look into it. i think i maxed out on my entries… i didn’t realize you hosted that wonderful group.. love the features you pick.
Lisa Jewell
Brilliant piece….I felt this to my core…xxx
ShadowDancer replied
Thank you Lisa.. you always tap into exactly what I’m trying to emit.. xxx
journey360
dark and complex…some good writing
ShadowDancer replied
thanks so much journey, gonna tuck this into my pocket and keep it. :)
bellmusker
This is rich with colour and ripe imagery…...very evocative writing!
ShadowDancer replied
bellmusker, your comment brightened my day.. thank you so much, i’m thrilled that you enjoyed.
phantomlimb
Just brilliant!!!
ShadowDancer replied
wow, phantom, thanks so much!