Star Whispers

ShadowDancer
Author: ShadowDancer
Word Count: 55
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Star Whispers

When I forget about myself, my troubles, my needs, and really listen to the world around me…

Star Whispers belongs to the following groups:

Art Inspired by Dreams, Core [C.O.R.E], Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Shameless Self-Promotion, THE SISTERHOOD, Up & Coming Writers and WMG

Sometimes, before the sultry night air
caresses the sycamore trees to their
slumber, I can hear them whispering
in the muted emerald hues of ivy:
rivers
rain
promises
rainbows
forever
love
life…..
Perhaps these are the same secrets
that the stars whisper every night,
as they wink from their swirling abyss
to those who listen.

  • butchart

    butchart

    what lovely musings…..... enchanted writing…....... b

  • ShadowDancer replied

    oh, thanks so much butch.. sometimes just writing little tidbits can keep the complicated soul afloat.

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    Just so beautiful….this is my last read tonight. Ahh…sure to have sweet dreams now. :))))XX

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Bonne nuit, goodnight, sweetest of deams to you. :)

  • lazydaze

    lazydaze

    yep my last read aswell and i lovely way 2 end the night !! beautifuly written !

  • ShadowDancer replied

    well thank you so much, i’m so glad you enjoyed :)

  • Astoreth

    Astoreth

    gorgeous indeed!! XX

  • ShadowDancer replied

    CC – you beautiful woman you, thanks so much!

  • shanemcgowan

    shanemcgowan

    awe that’s sweet gorgeous;-))

    This motivation hidden from our sight…
    Found in this shade, within your arms tonight…
    So hard to speak when I meet your eyes…
    So hard to move when we say goodbye

  • ShadowDancer replied

    thanks shane! xxx

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    So much said in so few words …....... beautifully written! – David :>))

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thank you David, I’m honored you appreciated it.

  • Cassey

    Cassey

    Not enough people listen. Beautiful!

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thanks so much Cassey! xx

  • Genevieve Robey

    Genevieve Robey

    very beautiful.

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thank you very much, I appreciate you coming by and leaving a sweet comment… it helped make my day.

  • Lisa  Jewell

    Lisa Jewell

    Such eloquence and beauty……

    A treasure poem… xxx

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Oh, thanks so much Lisa… you always so wonderful. Hugs n Kisses… xxx

  • linaji

    linaji

    SD.. how profound and full of wonder.. you are pure star soul.

  • ShadowDancer replied

    oh, Lina, how lovely you are, and your comment has warmed my heart so much on a day when I really needed it. thank you tremendously.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Absolutely beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xxoxoxoooxxoxoxo

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Oh Sally – thanks so much!!!!! Much LOVE to you!

  • anya

    anya

    Hey there Shadow, I like the idea of the same language being spoken both by the trees and by the stars.

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thanks Anya, I like to imagine a universal language among the components of our universe…

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    very nice writing !

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Well, thank you Shoaib!

  • BiographyofRed8

    BiographyofRed8

    I love whispering stars, you indeed have that rare gift of both listening to them and hearing them.. beautiful moment in this piece

  • ShadowDancer replied

    thank you so much Mr Red… greatly appreciated.

  • Arletta

    Arletta

    That’s sweet

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thanks!

  • izzybeth

    izzybeth

    Very beautiful indeed…

  • ShadowDancer replied

    Thank you so much izzybeth, so glad you like it.

  • mimi yoon

    mimi yoon

    so beautiful, shadowdancer… one can decorate her room with these words…
    you are so talented… :D

  • ShadowDancer replied

    mimi, thank you, such a wonderfully inspiring comment.

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love, nature, stars and trees