Fragments
I come to you in fragments of a dream
pieces & stems
& half chewed morsels of flesh
alive, dripping with honey
bittersweet
my eyes an awkward attempt
at seduction
digging my way down to your open
wound
to lick away your tears
I come to you in fragments of a dream
pieces & stems
& half chewed morsels of flesh
alive, dripping with honey
bittersweet
my eyes an awkward attempt
at seduction
digging my way down to your open
wound
to lick away your tears
Comments
Wow this was very nicely and simply worded. Abstract but clear and pointed. Well said Shadow!
Thank you, I’m glad you liked it… just wrote it tonight.
– ShadowDancer
interesting, to see yourself through someone else’s dream, through someone else’s desires! i like the concept….
thanks, i love dreamy stuff..
– ShadowDancer
deliciously majikal x
thank you, and thanks for reading
– ShadowDancer
this is just so, so wonderful. xx
Thank you very much, I’m glad you liked it. :)
– ShadowDancer
WOW THAT’S ALL I CAN SAY
wow back, keith, thank you so much, i’m thrilled that you enjoyed.. it’s an honor.
– ShadowDancer
Dude… I love this! Very well worded
Thanks! I really appreciate your comment. (And I love Majora’s Mask too!)
– ShadowDancer
Really nice, and rich with word thoughts.
thank you greatly, mary
– ShadowDancer
You had me at fragments of a dream… blazing hot…
thanks :)
– ShadowDancer
crisp, very nice
thank you journey… so much
– ShadowDancer
Wow, a very powerful tasty piece.
Genevieve, such a lovely thing to say, thank you truly
– ShadowDancer