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the attic window, where the leaves still dance to their favorite song by ShadowDancer

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it was the house at the
end of the street, empty,
cracked paint peeling,
dripping pieces of
what was supposed to be
on the forgotten path where
two young lovers once
planned their lives thinking everything
would only get better
as they danced to the rhythm of
Bonnie Raitt and whispered of visions
where their childrens feet ran across
the old oak floor being chased by
the dog while they made love
before breakfast and set
off to their wonderful jobs

now all that is left
is the sound
of the leaves tap-tapping on the
dirty window of the attic
in staccato to the
beat of feeling of falling
as another paint chip falls quietly
to the dried grass
like the dreams they once shared

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autumn, broken, dance, dreams, fall, house, leaves, loss, love, window

I am a dreamer, artist, and mother. I dance in the rain, spend too much time reading books, and live for my family. I am a gypsy, poet, musician, and artist. But most of all, I am a butterfly fairy. Come dream with me.

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  • linaji
    linajiover 3 years ago

    sigh… just bout to sign off.. and it is like you have been my beginning and now my ending.. the verse is like a song and the work you do with image I have always ‘fallen’ for.. tehee.xx.×.×.x.xzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  • the alpha and omega of your day? i love it.. guess it was my lucky day. sweet slumbers.. and check out my last poem “this moment” inspired by <pointing> you.. (giggling at ‘fallen’)…

    – ShadowDancer

  • linaji
    linajiover 3 years ago

    i missed that gotta go now.. a double dip.. :=}}}}}

  • ah.. today is a new day, and it’s now, and filled with so much promise. hope you had a restful sleep.

    – ShadowDancer

  • Del Millar
    Del Millarover 3 years ago

    Lovely work PJ oxo

  • thank you so much, Del… i always love seeing your face on my pages..

    – ShadowDancer

  • RajeevKashyap
    RajeevKashyapover 3 years ago

    Excellent Work…!

  • thank you Rajeev! i appreciate your visit.

    – ShadowDancer

  • msdebbie
    msdebbieover 3 years ago

    What a glorious photo – and your words are divine SD xoxox

  • oh, thank you truly msdebbie… what a wonderful compliment.. i shall wrap myself in it for a while.

    – ShadowDancer

  • BigCatPhotos
    BigCatPhotosabout 3 years ago

    This is excellent work, really brilliant.

  • thank you really so much…

    – ShadowDancer