Hunter

Selkie
Author: Selkie
Word Count: 111
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Hunter

Poem written by my son, Hunter – and photo.

Hunter belongs to the following groups:

! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Out Emotion, First Things, in-between, On Youth, Up & Coming Writers and Verses Dark

“I am embraced by inconceivable beauty
The waves of joy flow right through me
your kiss of bliss is a mystical thing
Life without it is an excruciating sting
To feel the euphoria flow through my veins
is to feel relinquished from all these pains
as my soul soars through the highest skies
I know not the goals that drive our lives
as i strive for your astonishing feeling
my skin and soul are slowly peeling
and as you hold me like a stone
I’ll melt away until i’m bone:”

~ written by my son, Hunter

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Companion piece to this photo.

  • bloodyactress

    bloodyactress

    and so the talents are passed on from generation to generation…beautiful.
    how old might i ask? just pure curiosity…

  • Selkie replied

    He’s 18 now, B. Just turned in May. He’s in Honolulu now…i miss him. Thank you for that, i’ll pass on your comment. He needs to hear it. He’s such a brilliant poet. xoxo

  • bloodyactress

    bloodyactress

    well happy birthday to him!! ooo wat a lucky duck!!! haha
    naturally…
    your welcome :)

  • Selkie replied

    :)

  • Angie Muccillo

    Angie Muccillo

    Wow brilliant piece of writing!! Very talented young man :-)

  • Selkie replied

    He is indeed :). Thanks.

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    He’s a good writer! He should join RB! :D

  • Selkie replied

    Not really his style (joining things, lol). I wish though.

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    well gee i WONDER where he get its from ;) how old is he?

  • Selkie replied

    Heh. Thanks. :)

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    oops nevermind

  • oneperfectkiss

    oneperfectkiss

    very beautiful x

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