Pianoforte  by Coriander Sievers

The music of pain
beats into me
like a piano
played by a drunk
in a bar
banging discordantly
up and down
the ivory keys
of my spine
an hour past closing-time


Comments

  • Colleen Milburn
    Colleen Milburnalmost 6 years ago

    Sublime.

  • Thank you so much, Colleen.

    – Coriander Sievers

  • Lynsye Medalia
    Lynsye Medaliaalmost 6 years ago

    One of the most beautiful ways I’ve heard pain described!

  • Thank you Lynsye, what a wonderful thing to say :)

    – Coriander Sievers

  • RebeccaT
    RebeccaTalmost 6 years ago

    very powerful and engaging…beautiful as well.

  • Thank you very much, Rebecca!

    – Coriander Sievers

  • Kaz Rhoads
    Kaz Rhoadsalmost 6 years ago

    Exquisite…

  • Thank you KNG!

    – Coriander Sievers

  • hotbeetees
    hotbeeteesalmost 6 years ago

    The poem has the quality of a haiku – masterful imagery, every word carrying its weight. A lovely pictorial image, also, perfectly harmonising with the poem. Plaintive, resigned, transcendent – out of the unlikely soil of pain, beauty grows.

  • Yeah, i don’t have the presence of mind to sound out a real haiku today, but this is how it came out…thank you so very much for that, it made me smile.

    – Coriander Sievers

  • kimangeline
    kimangelinealmost 6 years ago

    you are so beautiful…and the way you are working through your pain this way…in your images and writing…just wow girl

  • Thank you Kim! You’ve been really stepping out with the writing lately too.

    – Coriander Sievers

  • RebeccaWeston
    RebeccaWestonalmost 6 years ago

    The image and your words are so sad and very powerful XX
    Becca

  • Thank you sweet Becca :)

    – Coriander Sievers

  • aleci
    alecialmost 6 years ago

    wonderful zoe!!

  • Thank you Aleci!

    – Coriander Sievers

  • robarmstrong
    robarmstrongalmost 6 years ago

    Fantastic image! Luv it!

  • Thanks Robert :)

    – Coriander Sievers

  • Dragonhide
    Dragonhidealmost 6 years ago

    holy shit, that poem’s art.

    So is the image, of course.

    You rule.

  • Thanks, DB :) xo

    – Coriander Sievers

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