Circles of want.

Sarafeline
Author: Sarafeline
Word Count: 284
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Circles of want.

Erotica.

Circles of want. belongs to the following groups:

"Poetry and Beautiful Women" , The Community of Erotic Submission (approval required) and The Sensual Word

She trembled, her fingers searching frantically for his Zipper, she knew if she pleased him right he would make her pay. _
_She slid his pants to his ankles feeling all the while his deep black eyes hungrily watching her every move. Slowly she Kissed his warm skin, moving her tongue in graceful sweeps over the small hairs on his legs, ever moving upwards, softly biting and nibbling at his inner thighs.

He let out a deep sigh as she took her hands and placed thin skin between her soft wet lips, at first she tasted the tip devouring the flavour just like he desired, circling her pretty pink tongue in circles pushing with controlled thrusts just slightly deeper…
Then with no warning she dove to the stem taking his full man hood into her mouth, she could feel warmth on the back of her throat as she bobbed up and down softly, letting his wails descend into the night as he pulled at her long silky Raven hair.
Before he exploded into her, she pulled back wickedly eyeing the gaps in-between soft and hard skin and scooped down lower to run the tip of her tongue from the Inner crevices at the back to meet the hard and wet appendage at the front.
Again she pulled him near and thrust him again deep into her throat this time frantically pushing until she felt the froth at her taste buds, she swallowed greedily lapping every last drop, then softly withdrew.
His cold gaze shifted to her, and then to the bed where silk and chains were awaiting her, and she wanted her payment now.

To be continued….

  • Goldenspirit

    Goldenspirit

    Oh my, More.? You sure.? ;) x

  • Sarafeline replied

    Indeed :)..Always more to entice :).x.

  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    oh dear…..ummm…...yes….errr….....think i need a cold shower…beautiful erotica :¬)

  • Sarafeline replied

    Haha Thanks ;)..Always aim to please my readers :).x.

  • blazer

    blazer

    WOW….nice…very nice….
    more please

  • Sarafeline replied

    :).x.

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    Amazingly descriptive writing….I eagerly await for more :)) x

  • Sarafeline replied

    Thankyou :)....I’m sure my mind will conjure up a lil more ;).x.

  • charliethetramp

    charliethetramp

    i`m sure you will please your readers in more ways than one
    an erotic portrayal wonderfully depicted not left to the imagination
    you have a definate talent in the oral tradition as well as the written one
    just joking sara great piece of work

  • Sarafeline replied

    LOL!...I don’t really know what to say to that one charlie haha :).x.

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm

    WoW! I love where this story is Coming from! You entice truly my friend! Perfection of wordcraft!!!...)o(

  • Sarafeline replied

    Thankyou :)...I love words they can build castles in our minds :)..x.

  • poeticgenius

    poeticgenius

    Bravo I loved every minute the vividness subdued me I saw the images it played out piece by piece and this the type of thing I never tire of watching !PG$ baby

  • Sarafeline replied

    Thanks PG ;).x.

  • Michael Degenhardt

    Michael Degenh...

    This is quite the erotic write, one that leaves the reader wanting to read much much more. Michael

  • Sarafeline replied

    Indeed I hope so :).x.

  • Mark Ramstead

    Mark Ramstead

    Checking my wallet…. Damn it! Will you take a check? XXX

  • Sarafeline replied

    LOL!...

  • vampvamp

    vampvamp

    hazar!! ;]

  • Sarafeline replied

    THANNKYOU! ;).x.

  • msdebbie

    msdebbie 27 days ago

    The title is very entrancing too :) Great description of the oral tradition xoxo

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erotica and sex