Through the cracks
Feelings, heartcahe….
Just my heart laid bare from an experience.
Through the cracks belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical and The Sensual WordAll her wishes and dreams gathered in unison,words written in a parchment laid bare.
She recited them over and over to you but you chose to live in the world of the deaf, you just didn’t listen!...
You just didn’t listen
You just didn’t listen
She thought
maybe
she was too silent
So she screamed!,
Screamed
and
Screamed
She hit
her
bleeding hands
against the walls
to stain them with her passion
It seems you were also blind
(Or so you fooled her, that you could not see)
You didn’t look with compassion,
No Compassion.
Love of a weaker being
that could not stand the noise
so she fell silent once more
As you wish…
as you wish.
She fell,
and fell…..
Silent….
For So long
and hard
for so long
she forgot
Where the ground was
Where her feet met the earth
and the warmth of that feeling.
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So she started flying
(You didnt expect that did you)
Souring over mountains and lakes
Feeling breezes that lifted her broken wings
Nourishing her fractured soul
She started to dream
her Imagination running wild.
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Then you realize….
Then you see.
Then you hear.
But…........................................................................
She is no longer there
That room is grey
She is gone
She no longer has the key.
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Over years she travels then notices
A familiar box
Placed on the dry earth with no key
She desends
Her feet touch the ground
She stops dreaming
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The ground
Warm
and inviting
She glances at this strange grey box
It has no windows
It has no doors
It is a prison.
Inside stained with her blood
Inside Filled with her screams
Inside all her wishes that never transpired not while she was there.
....So many tears
So many years
So many years.
She barely recognises it at all
All the memory of pain is seeping through the cracks
She is numb…..
She picks the box up with care,
So fragile
So Grey
So
Bare.
Then she forgets how to hold these feelings, and it slips from her fingertips.
Her feet feel warm on the ground and she walks away.
lupa
Just magical…....I love the way this just pours out, brilliant write Sarafeline! xx
Sarafeline replied
Thankyou Lupa <3>
jacqleen
OMG…..I am sitting here CRYING….............THIS IS soooooooooooooo sooooooooooo AMAzING…what a Sad, Lonely Journey….but beautifully written….......! wow!
Sarafeline replied
AWE Sweetie :(...THANKYOU for feeling with me, that journey is spent, and I am happy now <3>
bloorain
amazing! I love your pattern it simply kept me engaging wanting to know more and more.
Sarafeline replied
There is much yet to tell :D…I have so much yet to write of, thankyou for reading :).
raymondoantonio
YES, WONDERFUL WRITING!! NOT BEING APPRECIATED FOR WHO YOU ARE AND YOUR CREATIVITY!! BELLISSIMO!!
Sarafeline replied
Thankyou for your understanding :).x.
TheWanderingBoo
incredibly beautiful writing
Sarafeline replied
Thankyou very much :D..x.
charliethetramp
powerfull painfull and brilliant sara
why when and where did it all go
the sad realisation that love has gone
and someone has to move on
i always love the depth and imagery in your words
great piece of writing sara
Sarafeline replied
Bad Grammar though, I think I should have tidied it up a lil first :S…Just read it back to myself haha :).x.
Always great to see you Charlie ;)
Cassidy JK (Ra...
Incredibly written. Painful but beautifully hopeful in the end.
Sarafeline replied
Thankyou Cassidy, we all have a lil hope in us :).x.