not so positive
i am not a murderer, nor a psycho waiting to explode. i just have a way with words that only turns to violence and sadness. it does not reflect my personality on the outside.
so dont be alarmed or scared. or i might end up in guantanamo bay somehow. lool
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Boredom Competitions on the 24/7, Dark Future, Freedom In Words & Art, Stillness Speaks **Max 2 uploads per day** {{No NUDES, ABSTRACT, CANDIDS or ACTION IMAGES}} and Up & Coming WritersHappy new year
Happy New Year?
End 08 dropping a tear
Begin anew 09 filled with fear
Evil this imminent year will be
Nothing nice or sweet this year will see
Murder, oppression and rape will seal
The preceded and this brand-new year
You buy them gifts, they buy some
Your money will go, but its not gonna come
“But good must be done.”
you say.
Till your financially numb
You glance behind to see your fading wealth
One last time before you face your health
You’ll feel a pain like thousands belts,
Clouting your heart, as you fall beaten to your debts.
I’ll be there,
I’ll pretend I care,
And show you the nearest way to DEATH
To me, a new year has no weight
All I see is a certain end, so I long-sufferingly wait.
Jane Keats
Yeah, I can relate. It’s hard not to feel these things and want to get them out sometimes, but I reckon the more of us who can stay positive on the whole, the better for the world :o) Certainly ‘interesting’ times ahead though!
sami al-haj
true true. i have ended my year somewhat badly. and if i was a troubled kid, i would probably have done something stupid. but its just a poem about a sad and darker new year rather than the common happy new year poems. snf i am not the best of writers.
thank you for reading it jane.
Xadrik
Its good to see someone actually still feels deep emotion and cares. I was once as anguished as you. There is nothing wrong with your writing. Make sure you keep it for so you can look at it in the future.
sami al-haj replied
i really value your words and comments. you are blessed.