my first kiss
description of a perfect first kiss in my view.
my first kiss belongs to the following groups:
1620, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, The Word Tree and WMGyou grab me by my hand,
dragging me away to your quiet domain,
sweeping me off my feet,
drawing ever closer
fate enclosing
your warm breath
condensing against my skin,
words flowing from your mouth,
meaning absolutely nothing.
actions scream at me
tenderly coaxing me into you embrace.
your hand,
gently pushing my hair out of my face,
your eyes
sparkling behind your fringe of long golden hair.
lips touching mine,
fireworks exploding,
world dissolving,
dream enlightening,
free flowing,
loving,
first kiss.
Leon Walker
Fantastic work!!!! Very descriptive and nicely written!
sally-ann rawl... replied
thanks again xx :)
sally-ann rawl...
thanks again xx :)
Ushna Sardar
nice piece of writing!
darkofnight
Just nothing short of wonderful writing Sally, So much a fan , This greying not so young Grandpa man.
sally-ann rawl... replied
50 is nothing,,,,you are still very young and have a lot of life to live
xx
darkofnight
The one of olden just turning golden, so appreciates your comment, now feeling less used and abused.
So Sweet.
PJC
LBstillwaters
I’m speechless! All I can say is, that has got to be the best first kiss in the history of mankind.
You are an extraordinary writer, especially to be so young. Physics can’t teach you how to wite like that. It’s a God given gift!
Ryan J. Douglas
hmm i can’t even remember my first kiss but i’m almost certain that it wasn’t as romantic as this otherwise i probably would. nice work.
sally-ann rawl... replied
lol, neither was myne, this is only in my dreams. thanks