Watching....

Sabbath
Author: Sabbath
Word Count: 74
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Watching, thats all I can do now. Just watch the world pass by me, the trees loose their leaves, nature grow and humanity walk pass without a glance. My eyes never blink, my body still, my heart beating slow for the life that I created. Once I wish I could just touch a humans face, feel their warmth, their emotions, their…love.

But that will never happen, so I just sit here and watch.

Watching....

This is linked to my other piece Hallow by Moon

Go read it and tell me what you think ^^

Watching.... belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical., Fantasy Art, Masterpieces: Literature and Writers' Market
  • DiannaLee

    DiannaLee, 3 months ago

    what a sweet piece of writing …I liked it:)

  • Daath Samael

    Daath Samael, 3 months ago

    very good, is it about mother nature?

  • Sabbath

    Sabbath, 3 months ago

    Maybe =P

  • Alison Pearce

    Alison Pearce, 3 months ago

    Wonderful prose

  • redhawk

    redhawk, 3 months ago

    Sounds like a disembodied soul watching the other souls walk over you until All Hallows Eve. Great short.

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar, 3 months ago

    Excellent writing…Sally xxoo

  • Melissa Sampson

    Melissa Sampson, 2 months ago

    Gave me goosebumps! My guess is a tree?

  • Melissa Sampson

    Melissa Sampson, 2 months ago

    Oh yea, I changed my mind, It’s got to be Mother Nature. I agree with Hilton!

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