Church Yard Scuffle.
A bit of a surprise for three thugs who attack somebody in the dark,life doesn’t aways have to turn out the way you expect.
Church Yard Scuffle. belongs to the following groups:
! Creative Writing & Poetry !, ABSTRACT DIGITAL ART AND WRITING, Creative Poetry Challenges, Creative, Talented, and Unknown, Inspired By Life, Something To Say, The beauty of poetry, The Red Writing Room, WMG and Writing: Persuing HappinessI had a surprise I could not tell,
for with this advantage I was bound to do well,
as the first one approached me I played by my wits,
to contend with their ignorance I played just a bit,
when the first one attacked me I put up my hand,
with one foot forward he made like a clam,
then two more came for me in this poor man’s defence,
and as they got closer with my legs slightly bent,
i leapt upon them as they hit the ground,
i could hear their voices just a whimpering sound,
with the darkness around us that won me the fight,
three men lay beneath me in the midst of the night,
for with this advantage I could not tell,
they could not see and I could see well,
in their moment of darkness they fell prey to the night,
at the end of the path what did they find?
accustomed to darkness for I was born blind.
gemini63
Now that is good
The blind sensing presence of others and sensing they were attackers very cleverly worded
:))
wigs
you are right that was an expecting ending….. very good
wigs
Rudywalsh replied
Thanks for the feature much appriciated,just sorry it took time to get back to you,thanks again.
PapasGirl
exquisite words..you write so well..