I touch your lips and feel them quiver
I smell the scent that you deliver
I hear you breathe and feel you shiver
I taste the salt as you smoulder
With these blind eyes I see forever
I touch your lips and feel them quiver
I smell the scent that you deliver
I hear you breathe and feel you shiver
I taste the salt as you smoulder
With these blind eyes I see forever
ozjami
very good..i like!
Dean Warwick
Very good, All senses enhanced. Love enhanced. Great insite.
David Meacham
Tres bonne XXXXXXX
demon
Excellent RD…really like this, sensuous and feeling…:))
Hoffard
Awesome poem! Very well written!
RoughDiamond
OH I wake up and see all these lovely comments :) x thank you very much :) x
Nikki Farrow
Fantastic writing! Wow!
RoughDiamond
Thanks NIx :)x
I love short writings.
marcusjohn
Lovely writing. Short, however with so much meaning..
RoughDiamond
thank you marc : x
mister khan
an excellent, succinct interpretation of aspects of the popular past time of horizontal jogging.
spot on.
Sharon Perrett
beautiful words, wonderfully written
hpzworkz
WOW, sheer romance drips from your words, keep up the good work
RoughDiamond
actually there’s this one too!
Alex Moir
I bow. Like a Japanese businessman, I bow to your effortlessly heart-rending poetry. Beautiful.
RoughDiamond replied
Wow thanks Alex :) x