Trapped

demon, 11 months ago

Hmmm thought you said you don’t write RD…this goes so well with the pic…well done..

RoughDiamond, 11 months ago

You think so?

demon, 11 months ago

Yes I do think…

sometimes…

Lumineux, 11 months ago

Very powerful RD, your words really hit home.

RoughDiamond, 11 months ago

thank you Lumi … your comments mean a lot to me.

mlgkats, 11 months ago

this is really heart felt , well written .i really think some of us feel this way some times
well done

RoughDiamond, 11 months ago

thanks mig

nikspix, 11 months ago

Nice poetry. Very poignant (SP??)

Meach, 11 months ago

Heh Rough you have hidden talents – well they wee hidden until you unleashed this bit of emotion on the the world stage.
Excellent my friend XXX

RoughDiamond, 11 months ago

Thanks Nix and Meach :) x

hpzworkz, 10 months ago

definitely gives the feeling of entrapment, great words

RoughDiamond, 10 months ago

thanks hpz :) x

justloveme21, 9 months ago

it makes me think and thats what i like….perfect words for a terrible feeling…

Alex Moir, 9 months ago

I feel like a little kid exploring a cave or a dark house… scared, just by reading your words. Wonderful. I applaud. Also, I suddenly empathize with the claustrophobic…

RoughDiamond in reply to Alex Moir’s comment, 9 months ago

Thanks Alex … it doesn’t happen often, but every now and then I get a brilliant flash!

LMRE, 7 months ago

beauitful.

LMRE, 7 months ago

makes you feel that you were trapped and by reading that your let free

RoughDiamond in reply to LMRE’s comment, 7 months ago

Thanks Krista :) x

deliriousgirl, 6 months ago

OH JFC! This is totally stunning, I don’t quite know whether to sob or just to fucking melt to the floor in a tiny warm puddle!