I entered and I could not leave
you took me and I could not breathe
it spoke of love
and felt of hate
moving along the walls
finding the door
forgotten flowers
abandonned words
who should listen to this
why is there nothing
..............
trapped
..............
demon
Hmmm thought you said you don’t write RD…this goes so well with the pic…well done..
RoughDiamond
You think so?
demon
Yes I do think…
sometimes…
Marion Cullen
Very powerful RD, your words really hit home.
RoughDiamond
thank you Lumi … your comments mean a lot to me.
mlgkats
this is really heart felt , well written .i really think some of us feel this way some times
well done
RoughDiamond
thanks mig
Nikki Farrow
Nice poetry. Very poignant (SP??)
David Meacham
Heh Rough you have hidden talents – well they wee hidden until you unleashed this bit of emotion on the the world stage.
Excellent my friend XXX
RoughDiamond
Thanks Nix and Meach :) x
hpzworkz
definitely gives the feeling of entrapment, great words
RoughDiamond
thanks hpz :) x
justloveme21
it makes me think and thats what i like….perfect words for a terrible feeling…
Alex Moir
I feel like a little kid exploring a cave or a dark house… scared, just by reading your words. Wonderful. I applaud. Also, I suddenly empathize with the claustrophobic…
RoughDiamond replied
Thanks Alex … it doesn’t happen often, but every now and then I get a brilliant flash!
LMRE
beauitful.
LMRE
makes you feel that you were trapped and by reading that your let free
RoughDiamond replied
Thanks Krista :) x
deliriousgirl
OH JFC! This is totally stunning, I don’t quite know whether to sob or just to fucking melt to the floor in a tiny warm puddle!