If Love

RoughDiamond
Author: RoughDiamond
Word Count: 67
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If love to me I saw afar
I’d give my life and touch a star

If love to me would just pass by
I’d give my life to see it fly

If love to me would come and stay
I’d give my life just for that day

If love to me would come from you
I’d live my life and see it through

If Love

If Love belongs to the following groups:

In the Moment
  • DarrellMoseley

    DarrellMoseley, 12 months ago

    If love to me, I held in my hand
    I’d open my hand, and give it a kiss
    ‘f love to me was free to fly
    I’d trust it would always come back
    If love to me returned
    I’d always be happy
    If love to me was a gift
    I would love to unwrap it,
    Each and every day!

    I have been blessed many times over, and have the most amazing friends! I love your expression enough to add some myself! My wife is another wonderiful passion as well! She is a true supporter of mine! She called me this morning, cry’n like a baby reading an E-mail she had wrote for me, to an Uncle of mine! What I have gone through over the loss of my Dad! The reason I do not care to have anything to do with my sibblings, or my Mom! I have been blessed, with forgiveness, but can not take their abuse! My wife, can not either! I can not tell you just how much my wonderiful wife was help heal some of my pain, and how much she means to me! There a special place in my heart, that time will never change! She is my soulmate, and I dearly love her!

  • Mundy Hackett

    Mundy Hackett, 12 months ago

    Special, thanks

  • loramae

    loramae, 11 months ago

    You reveal what so many of us desire…beautifully wriiten!

  • cdhammer

    cdhammer, 11 months ago

    I like this style of writing – it reaches in and opens me up

  • Magnetic

    Magnetic, 10 months ago

    Beautifully written….

  • RoughDiamond

    RoughDiamond, 10 months ago

    wow all these comments … my apologies for not seeing them before … I never expected comments on my writing

    thank you x x x

  • hpzworkz

    hpzworkz, 8 months ago

    very touching .. wow you sure have a romantic soul inside ;) ... keep writing your gentle poems

  • RoughDiamond

    RoughDiamond, 8 months ago

    thanks hpz … it’s my only one really :S

  • Alex Moir

    Alex Moir, 8 months ago

    Simply wonderful. Simple, pure, and yet very deep. I eat it up.

  • RoughDiamond

    RoughDiamond in reply to Alex Moir’s comment, 8 months ago

    Thank you. It’s my first.

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 8 months ago

    this great and well written

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