Metamorphosis

Rosalie Dale IPA
Author: Rosalie Dale IPA
Word Count: 137
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Unfurling gently in the soft, late sun,

they shyly extend their fingers.

Tentative, as the newfound freedom offers no resistance ,

they relish the warmth.

Is it real, or is it a dream?

Will it fade

and the restrictions of their previous existence suddenly reappear?

Can they trust this new environment?

What does the future hold?

Is it worth the risk,

this glowing warmth

that stirs the sap and gives life to once-dormant extremities?

The golden orb slips lower. The damp cool night descends.

No longer furled, their fronds are now exposed.

The forest seems so different now

… they are vulnerable

… and cold

… and confused … in a place of no return.

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Shivering gently as the soft, early sun

caresses the forest, they turn

… to face the warmth of a brand new day.

Metamorphosis

I wrote this last night as a companion to my Fitzroy Fronds image … and as a comment on Life.
I do intend to put both together in one image when the creative juices inspire!!

Metamorphosis belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical.
  • Craig Hender IPA

    Craig Hender IPA, 4 months ago

    Beautiful Rosalie, just beautiful.

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Craig Hender IPA’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thanks my friend …

  • Sharon Hammond

    Sharon Hammond, 4 months ago

    Oh my – you write AND take beautiful photos. Is there no end to your talent?

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Sharon Hammond’s comment, 4 months ago

    Inspiration struck Sharon!! Actually both have been lurking all my life – occasionally they come together.

  • SharonD

    SharonD, 4 months ago

    Wow Rosalie,this is great.I had no idea you could write too.

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to SharonD’s comment, 4 months ago

    Pleased you like it Sharon. I suspect we are all multi-faceted!

  • SharonD

    SharonD, 4 months ago

    Hi Rosalie,the many gifts bestowed by God.

  • 6point1

    6point1Diplomat, 4 months ago

    Awww This will surely keep them warm, well written.

  • Maximus

    Maximus, 4 months ago

    And you can write too. excellent. :)

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA, 4 months ago

    Thanks heaps Dan

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Maximus’s comment, 4 months ago

    The trouble with writing Maxie is that one has to have a bit of space / quiet / inspiration!!! Not always available in today’s lifestyle. Thanks buddy.

  • Maximus

    Maximus, 4 months ago

    Very true.. not easy to always find. :)

  • 6point1

    6point1Diplomat, 4 months ago

    no no thank you!!!!!

  • GailD

    GailD, 4 months ago

    Great writing Rosalie. Fits the image perfectly. Great work.

  • photos40

    photos40, 4 months ago

    STUNNING.!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to GailD’s comment, 4 months ago

    Pleased you like it Gail.

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to photos40’s comment, 4 months ago

    Appreciated Wayne very much.

  • Prasad

    Prasad, 4 months ago

    Thought provocative…................

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Prasad’s comment, 4 months ago

    Deeper than it appears Prasad!!

  • loramae

    loramae, 4 months ago

    Hmmm…look forward to reading more! This is beautiful!

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to loramae’s comment, 4 months ago

    Thank you Loramae

  • Warren Williams

    Warren Williams, 4 months ago

    Are there any other talents that you not telling us about ,as this writting is excellent, Writting can be your future when photography fades away. ( You know what I mean)

    Take that quiet space and the inspiration will arrive .

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Warren Williams’s comment, 4 months ago

    :+) Yep I understand – thank you for the encouragement – pleased you like it Warren.

  • margo

    margo, 4 months ago

    Beautifully crafted word pictures to accompany your photographic image. You are a clever lady Rosalie.

  • Marvin Collins

    Marvin Collins, 4 months ago

    Beautiful Rosalie, I love it, you are really quite talented!!!

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to margo’s comment, 4 months ago

    Appreciated Margo – I need to get back to some writing so I can put both together more often!!!

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Marvin Collins’s comment, 4 months ago

    I’m convinced it is in all of us Marvin – just needs a catalyst sometimes to bring it out!

  • ben d'acunto

    ben d'acunto, 4 months ago

    Love it Rosalie…weel done!

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA, 4 months ago

    Thanks Ben

  • pinkyjain

    pinkyjain, 4 months ago

    So very lovely Rosalie, beautiful words

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to pinkyjain’s comment, 4 months ago

    I appreciate the favouriting pinky – pleased it appeals to you.

  • debsphotos

    debsphotos, 4 months ago

    Always thought you were a lady of many talents Rosalie…..Beautiful words for a lovely image!!!.

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to debsphotos’s comment, 4 months ago

    :+) Thanks heaps Deb.

  • coffeebean

    coffeebean, 4 months ago

    Yes this is just so beautiful and suits your image perfectly.

  • lianne

    lianne, 4 months ago

    Incredible! And the image is pretty spectacular too!

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to coffeebean’s comment, 4 months ago

    Jenny thank you so much -

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to lianne’s comment, 4 months ago

    Lianne, coming from you, I am flattered. Thank you. Love your written word, and your ‘lucky’ shots!!! Keep it up.

  • mariarty

    mariarty, 4 months ago

    Hey Rosalie, beautiful words. A lady with hidden talents.

  • Roger Sampson

    Roger Sampson, 4 months ago

    My Rosalie – I am so pleasantly touched by what I just read. Even the 3rd and 4th reading left me feeling the same. Being very honest my friend – this is very, very good. I’m smiling right now.

    Rog
    P.S. Does this mean I’m out of a job? hehe

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to mariarty’s comment, 4 months ago

    THanks Marie – you flatter me.

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    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Roger Sampson’s comment, 4 months ago

    Hey Rog – you also flatter me – so pleased it evoked a smile – and no, you are certainly never out of a job! I could not draw out the meaning the way you can (BTW yes, I am still contemplating that other more complex collab!!!)

  • Enivea

    Enivea, 14 days ago

    Beautiful words and photo. Look forward to seeing more along these lines :-))

  • Rosalie Dale IPA

    Rosalie Dale IPA in reply to Enivea’s comment, 14 days ago

    Thank you so much for the encouragement.

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