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*I feel pain….
the symmetry of confusion,
having enclosed my freedom.
Golden leaves without sap to breath.
Inside…mirrors of affections,
like needles hurting my Soul.
I feel empty….
the tightest…the prisoner.
Squeezing colors out of my skin,
and creating a mirage of a passion,
volcano of conceived ideas,
softening the lips,
recently kissed by adoration.
I adore…
even the pain.
The intellect is bloodless,
but it hurts being dressed
with regalia’s dignities.
Behind, the cloister of the old Virgin,
the worlds are dreaming Viriditas.
Galaxies of green exhalations,
sucking the water of the Universe,
while…my mind….dried up of it,
is burning like a Sun,
proud and fit,
for the intense coupling….
dancing….
stepping music,
that is breaking the rhythm,
of the gentle Light’s hissing.
Rosa
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Comments
love this Rosa! you’re amazing soul! xo
Hi Ushna…I feel really well with this work. It has come out very swiftly…not harships…no anxieties as others….
I feel honored and happy with your presence in it.
Rosa
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A phenomenal mirror of a soul’s anguished desire to break free!!
Stunning image …and powerful words from your heart’s cry!!
You are not very far away from “some truth”…yes..the Soul is anguished in many moments of our daily lives. I feel happy for I have heard Alejandro Jodorowski saying so many times..this ..“_the art that it does not serve for creating beauty and healing …is not a worthy art”_ Well..even that we may think that “beauty” is a subjective feeling…a concept so personal, I can see beauty in it, so if I was anguished..or my soul was….can say that when looking into it…I feel healed….refreshed by the surrounding world.
Thanks a lot Ken…
Rosa
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absolutely amazing..mesmerizing…just wonderful!
Dear helene..
I thank you…so much. I have been missing you here. Your strong countenance and energy.
Rosa
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amazing!!!!!!!!!! .. you bring such peace and light to us all , with your love and muses.. besitos desde loa florida:)..
fabulous work
Thank you My Lady.
Always there…faithful and kind.
Rosa
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Tan intenso! pero al mismo tiempo me viene un sentimiento de tranquilidad. La energia verde parece libélulas mirando al ser adentro de las paredes o quizas tratando de chupar la energia que expulse.
Como otras veces me impresionan mas las ultimas lineas de la poesia, la mente quemandose como el sol, bailando, pisando con el ritmo. Me encanta!
Gracias Richard.
Eso de gustarte más las últimas frases de mis poemas tiene sentido.
Es un poco cómo la “guinda” de un pastel. Uno empieza con dudas..con una idea abríendose camino..y de repente se abre..y luego se cierra. Te quedas en el climax del poema..en el punto en el algo me dice dentro..“ya está…no digo más” y es… porque mi alma se queda satisfecha. Es algo así. Raramente lo corrijo.
Me encanta la idea de las libelulas…porque me parecen criaturas sobrenaturales.
Un abrazote…
Rosa
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Very dimensional! “Symmetry of confusion… mirage of passion” Good wording. Nice parallel structure— verbal motif compliments the the image. Love your work, Rosa!
Thank you!!!!
Such a time without your company..
Hope you will be here for a time…..I appreciate so much your insight about my “verbal motif”. You did not realize that I had used a wrong word for that “stuff” of the Virgin..had used “cluster” which it sounded something like “odd” and when looking at the dict. I chose “cloister”….for that was better fitting. I have learned a lot with your insight..really..I am much more " critic" and is worthy.
A hug for you…
Rosa
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Amazing work!!
Thank you very much for your kindness….and support.
Rosa
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Rosa, you are simply exquisite
Thanks Larry….mmmm…. exquisite…
There is a new challenge in Nirvana…. will you take a look?
Rosa (A hug!!)
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