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*EMPTY CHAOS

If my eyes would not be blind,
I would tear the clouds away.
With words mighty as thunder,
hissing perfumed ivory.

If the Sun would not be eslaved
reason would melt away my fears.
If the skin would not press down my heart ,
I would dance the The Seven Veils for you.

Roll …roll…passed the Halls of Poetry.
Roll…roll…around the Earth you roll…
in my dreams the Master is Slave,
and the ground is turned into stars dead.
In my dreams, Silence is a pinion,
around the axis of my empty brain,
In my dreams Chaos is Order,
out of disarrangement…out of any pace.
And the millions of cells returning,
to the darkness of a birthing,
where a crying is a breathing rytthm,
a laughing is a an earthquake
and a tear is some sliding sighing,
touched by the dew of my sensing.
Rosa*
© Copyright Rosa Cobos 2013 – All rights reserved

This image has been entirely done with my own stock photographs all blended and composed with Photoshop.

Comments

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosover 1 year ago

    EMPTY CHAOS

    If my eyes would not be blind,
    I would tear the clouds away.
    With words mighty as thunder,
    hissing perfumed ivory.

    If the Sun would not be eslaved,
    reason would melt away my fears.
    If the skin would not press down my heart ,
    I would dance the The Seven Veils for you.

    Roll …roll…passed the Halls of Poetry.
    Roll…roll…around the Earth you roll…
    in my dreams the Master is Slave,
    and the ground is turned into stars dead.

    In my dreams, Silence is a pinion,
    around the axis of my empty brain,
    In my dreams Chaos is Order,
    out of disarrangement…out of any pace.
    And the millions of cells returning,
    to the darkness of a birthing,
    where a crying is a breathing rytthm,
    a laughing is a an earthquake
    and a tear is some sliding sighing,
    touched by the dew of my sensing.
    Rosa

    © Copyright Rosa Cobos 2013 – All rights reserved

  • RosaCobos
    RosaCobosover 1 year ago

  • JRGarland
    JRGarlandover 1 year ago

    The great depths of poetry is usually hidden within the shrouded images, metaphorically expressed on page. Your poetry follows this great formula bringing the reader to seek out its meaning within each one’s soul, allowing the individual to find their own jewels within. With the written words you provide an image to add greater depth and meaning to each making this post a super dynamic presentation of you. Well done indeed!!

  • Dear John…your words are intelligent and direct. This is what I meant the first time time having to make a comment..I started to view it in a poetical way. I discovered then that it was somehow “easy” for me. and then it started something new…that obviously had been also “hidden” behind other issues of Life.
    I am glad because this last work has rewarded me with so many wonderful reviews….it is amazing. yours is great. Thank you so much, dear John.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • linaji
    linajiover 1 year ago

    Goodness Rosa …. The poem and image are insuperable ! Love

  • Hi dear Lina….so good to have you here again!!!!
    Thank you so much, for still being here, warm and hearty.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • kenspics
    kenspicsover 1 year ago

    The vortex of chaos…being sucked into the black hole of thought!!!!
    An awesome image…. and ..poetry that cries out to be read, to be heard, and to be understood by each of us in our own unfathomable way!!! WOW!!!

  • Hello dear Ken!!!
    You have defined the whole picture in two accurate sentences! Witty chap you are!. I am so happy to hear from you and counting with your friendship. Thank you so much.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • Donna19
    Donna19over 1 year ago

    Really a feeling write Rosa. Those are some interesting dreams. Each provoking thoughts to wander down truly creative roads themselves. Just always enjoy your uniqueness as a writer Rosa. xo

  • Thank you so much, Donna…I am always happy or receive your messages of support and insight.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • Larry Butterworth
    Larry Butterworthover 1 year ago

    Extremely excellent in words and image, your cup never runs dry Rosa,
    Best Regard
    Larry

  • Dear Larry….it is a warm and sensible to feel your presence in here. Thank you very much for still being here.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • linskudd
    linskuddover 1 year ago

    Instant fave Rosa. Love the image & the words just wonderful – rolling across my mind, fizzing on my brain, burning into my thoughts. Would LOVE to hear a youtube of you speaking this. ;o) xx

  • Hi dear Lindsay."..I would say…I would also like to hear some of these clips. But it seems that the time does not “strecht” as It did before…(though I wonder when….) So good to have your heart in here…thanks a lot.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • helene ruiz
    helene ruizover 1 year ago

    excellent!

  • thanks sister…..good to see you are still here…
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

  • Richard G Witham
    Richard G Withamover 1 year ago

    Fantastic! I think I see my self-portrait! You have caused me to wonder what my mind looks like in those moments when it’s filled with noise and images and overall Chaos. I don’t think it would be this beautiful, but it would be just as empty. A wonderful rendering Rosa. I especially like the illusion of a stick figure person in white light lost in and rippled by the confusion.

  • Many thanks, Richard!!!. Well it seems it is normal to have the sense of chaos. The real interesting is to find that there is a kind of pattern behind. I am sure that your chaos is beautiful and that the emptiness you perceive is as nurturing as the closed night. You create and live inside many meditative images and you are craving for that order…that in the own disorder they are dancing freely. Un abrazote para tí.
    Rosa

    – RosaCobos

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