First Meeting

rosabelbelieve
Author: rosabelbelieve
Word Count: 17
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First Meeting

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The corner of his mouth
turned upwards
as if it were
marking a page
in my history.

  • veritasunsaid

    veritasunsaid

    Awesome!! very smart indeed

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    Thank you so much :)

  • bellmusker

    bellmusker

    Oh, just perfect…....sublime.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    I really appreciate your comment bell and the favourite as well, thank you :) It’s my first day here on the site so I’m still figuring everything out. I’m enjoying your writing so much and can’t wait to check out more :)

  • AFogArty

    AFogArty

    brief brilliance. Everlasting magic.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    what a wonderful thing to hear-thank you :)

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    oh, incredible!

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thank you erika :)

  • Holly Ringland

    Holly Ringland

    these seventeen words illuminated an entire scene in my mind, so evocative are they, laden with that feeling of that moment. just… beautiful. welcome to the bubble :)

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    Thanks so much for your beautiful comment Holly :)

  • Leda D

    Leda D

    fantastic, beautiful xox

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thank you very much Leda, I’m glad you like it, and thanks for the favourite :)

  • William Hallatt

    William Hallatt

    A bookmark in his memory
    of me
    to be returned to at leisure
    in privacy.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    great image William—glad you shared the picture it painted for you :)

  • Genevieve Robey

    Genevieve Robey

    Love it love it love it! Beautiful piece, beautiful moment.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thanks Genevieve, I’m so glad it speaks to you :)

  • Renae Crosthwaite

    Renae Crosthwaite

    You made me smile and think of the possibilities

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    I’m glad Renae, thank you :)

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  • TheWanderingBoo

    TheWanderingBoo

    beautiful

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thank you :)

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Congrats on your writing section feature! :) x

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thanks erika! It was such a pleasant surprise :)

  • lianne

    lianne

    What an evocative, and truly beautifully crafted piece of writing that captures – as Holly so rightly says – so much emotion in so few perfect words.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thanks lianne, that’s so wonderful to hear, you have no idea! :) thanks so much for the favourite as well :)

  • Fiona Christensen

    Fiona Christensen

    oh simply beautiful…

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    thank you Fiona, I really appreciate that :)

  • veritasunsaid

    veritasunsaid

    Im back to this page again
    but this time I bring gifts
    CONGRATULATIONS, you have been FEATURED in love bullets
    =)

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    oh my, thank you SO much veritas!

  • ArcadiaTempest

    ArcadiaTempest

    so perfectly delicious ….I could eat this brilliant verse!!

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    what a wonderful image—thank you Arcadia! :)

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    No doubt it was! Great way to mark a moment.

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    “No doubt it was!”
    indeed ;) thanks bluewhite!

  • IntriCate

    IntriCate

    Love it!

  • rosabelbelieve replied

    I’m so glad to hear it IntriCate :)

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