You cant let go, and just cant see
its not you he loves, its me
rejection you just couldn’t stand,
the thought of him caressing my hand
you realised but all too late
the cards you dealt
sealed your own fate
if you live by the sword then die by the sword
so is the saying,
you wanted him back but he wasn’t obeying
why would he want to its plain to see
he has loyalty and trust in a person like me
things you say or things you do don’t mean that very much
cos we are together right here and now
I’m the one with his tender touch
you cant let go
thought of when people move on in life and relationships
Patrick Ronan, 6 months ago
Very very beautiful and well written it deserves a prize
Karen Martin, 6 months ago
very nice
Meach, 6 months ago
Nice one Sue – you can be the next Shania Twain – I’ll play the drums for you
susan davies, 6 months ago
thanks for the comments patrick, karen and meach, so appreciated and to meach can just about string a line together but not a note, my daughter kayleigh can do the singing shes won competitions singing think twice, celine dion
Sarah Rish, 6 months ago
Wow I love it great job!
Judi Taylor, 5 months ago
Scorned by love … thoughtless and neglectful. How sad when we lose that touch. But life goes on and if we learn to feel again. Life is so precious. It is good to move on with it. Wonderful words.
kim Davitt, 3 months ago
nice poetry susan, hope you are the winner in the love circle lol ( I know u are)
susan davies in reply to kim Davitt’s comment, 3 months ago
yes, you are right