Nourishment-

Robert Dye
Author: Robert Dye
Word Count: 48
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When placing your Kettle
onto the hot back burner,
It bubbles, foams, and froths.
If you forget it for too long,
Neglecting, turning your back,
Leaving it boiling up and over,
Steaming into wispy thin air,
All you’re left with, in the End,
Is an Empty Pot.

Nourishment-

This a poem using an extended metaphor that pertains to the “nourishment” of the self to overcome angst, grief, and loneliness, in hopes to attain peace and happiness in life.

Nourishment- belongs to the following groups:

Complex Simplicity of Art, All Things Poetic, Prose, Philosophical., DaDa Land, Self as Other, Something To Say, Spiritual Art and Writers' Market
  • jianina

    jianina, 5 months ago

    serious and humorous…every to to life…love the metopher!

  • Robert Dye

    Robert Dye in reply to jianina’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks for reading and commenting. Take care, don’t boil over, Peace-

  • jianina

    jianina, 5 months ago

    To put the world right in order, we must first put the nation in order; to put the nation in order, we must first put our family in order; to put our family in order, we must first cultivate our personal life; we must first set our hearts right….Confucius(Great Quotes from Great Leaders)

  • Robert Dye

    Robert Dye in reply to jianina’s comment, 5 months ago

    Yes! I have studied this… Confucius had many interesting philosophies pertaining to life. This is a basic principle that has many complexities involved. Peace of mind, affecting the state of well being towards friends and families, affecting the whole community and State, which leads to the Empire/Nation, and the entire world. You seem to be quite idealistic and hopefully thoughtful. Glad to hear your point of views… Take care, Peace-

  • mlgkats

    mlgkats, 5 months ago

    well put , i see you are a writer also , that is good as well , like i said you are very creative

  • jianina

    jianina, 5 months ago

    I would like to think i am thoughtful!...or at least thought-filled…either way, i have great thought when i see your work!...I like how you speak broading and generally..applying to all, as in mankind. It gives a sense of being good for the soul!...

  • lianne

    lianne, 5 months ago

    As true to relationships as to kettles certainly – thought provoking Robert. Thank you

  • Robert Dye

    Robert Dye in reply to lianne’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thank you lianne, glad that you found this somewhat interesting and appreciate it for what it’s worth. Take good care, Peace-

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