Disrespected
the love we can be shown
can be so deep, so overwhelming
we pour ourselves into it
open our hearts to eat it all up
things go rough though
when love goes over a huge bump
trying to truely accept and respect
EVERYTHING about you.
Thanks Anger Management Group for the Feature =]]
Disrespected belongs to the following groups:
All Around the Styles, All Out Emotion, Anger Management, Dark artists, dark art, Deep Within, Freedom In Words & Art, The Art of Pain and The beauty of poetryRebuked coldly in dark stares
From my half-hearted smile with care
Raucous screams from their lungs
Their pedestrian faces horridly hung
Our dissimiliarities are worlds apart
Yet our addiction; the same
Our paradox minds wont settle
I dont know how we’ll weather this fight
To my darling Am I ever veraious;
Deprived once of love, now pouring out the truth to you
My feelings before; so confined. Hidden inside
Locked away, but not wanting to hide
My compelling stories I divulge to you
Your loving ardent face turned to me
Not believing, complete incredulity, disgusted.
Your imperious influence on my life
Has never been of any indifference
Inherently I beg to know your thoughts
I accolade your every word, no matter how
Debacle my obediance to you could turn out
Your words seem disparaging to me at times like these
The disgust in your nose, it shows
This open disrespect for me
That you have.
rubyjo
Congratulations you have been featured in Anger Management
Strong write
ripinamberlost replied
thanks you so much
msdebbie
Hello Chloe, there are many lines I like in this piece, but the three which especially stand out or resonate for me are below:
1) Their pedestrian faces horridly hung
2) Locked away, but not wanting to hide
3) The disgust in your nose, it shows
Congrats on the feature – I’m with rubyjo, it’s a strong write xoxo
ripinamberlost replied
thank you ^ _ ^