"INSOMNIA STAR"
Poertry is based on daily life…I see the good and bad, that is what an artist work is based on. Loving to have insite on others passions and secrets. I’m happy to met people that understand my writing…as crazy as it may seem at times…it’s honest.
Richelle…smile
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ART HOUSE PRODUCTIONS INTERNATIONAL, Art Inspired by Dreams, Blue Room, Live, Love, Dream: May you have a Blessed Christmas Season , Purple Passion Gallery. 2 per day , Self as Other, Something To Say, The Eyes Have It, The Word Tree and WMGJust rest a second,
take the back seat.
My overexposed mind,
has to assess time.
Foolish as such,
I don’t know what to trust.
Frigid storms in fiery June,
warmth from a sultry moon.
Piercing voices,
escalating way too high.
Rains dripping from empty skies.
These bizarre moments,
drive me to hide,
my soul existence into disquise.
This mirage of images,
invade my thoughts.
Leaving me with this delusional,
sense of reality.
My peaceful slumber,
that will never be.
Let us rest a moment,
grip the back seat.
My overexposed mind,
has to assess limited time.
I think for a spell,
but now I’ve forgot.
I struggle with an obsession,
of my none obtainable farce.
Echo…what echo,
illusions with no conclusion.
I rest a second,
ponder the back seat.
As my overexposed mind,
will constantly assess precious time…
Written By: RL.Bean
Copyright © 05.21.08
Hayley Cafarella
Awesome description of the awful half awake state! I love the phrase “overexposed mind” – that is so true!
Richelle replied
Thank you so much…
DiannaLee
very engaging piece…couldn’t stop reading it…interesting!
Richelle replied
Thank you…
Richelle
Thank you spell check…keep taking your meds…
mohammed
Awesome description love it
Richelle replied
Thank you so much…
Natella2020
I know a few people who can relate. This is the result of insomnia I take it? Well, tired thoughts can help reach the uncensored parts of your mind. Your writing is great, wonderful descriptions and flow.
Richelle replied
I seem to write most of my best poetry and lyrics in the late night hours…crazy. Thank you so much for your kind words.
CATNIPMEOW
This rocks from one overexposed mind to another !!!
Richelle replied
Thank you for taking the time to read my work!
Andrew Reed
great wording
Richelle replied
Thank you so much…
Richelle replied
Thank you Andrew…
Sristy
ithas a deep meaning… I wonder what made you pour your heart on a paper so beautifully
Richelle replied
Thank you so much for your kind words…
KEITH R. WILL...
very nice
Richelle replied
Thank you Keith…
Julian Escardo
All I can say is wow…......deep and insightful – and may I say so, I can relate.
Richelle
Thank you so much Julian for taking the time to read my work. Insomnia leads me to write, so I guess it’s not such a bad thing…
Watertoy
A great composition.
Richelle replied
Thank you…
jwinman
very well done…
Delphine de Noire
Beautiful…Intense…Sleeplessness…
Exquisite…
Mx
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