Between Heaven and Earth by Rhoufi
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“Isn’t it true that you start your life a sweet child believing in everthing under your father’s roof? Then comes the day of the Laodiceans, when you know you are wretched and miserable and poor and blind and naked, and with the visage of a gruesome grieving ghost you go shuddering through nightmare life.”
 
~ Sal Paradise in “On the Road” by Jack Kerouac
 


Between Heaven and Earth

You need not open a door to be outside,
to find yourself on the edge of darkness –
between night and day,
land and sky,
heaven and earth.

This is no place for you,
you have no business here,
with these other people,
these invisible ones;
‘I do not belong here,’ you tell them, over and over.

The first time it happened was a mistake, an accident;
you hadn’t worked for months,
the money ran out, and
the light died in front of your eyes while reading in your chair;
then you finally understood the meaning of “dying light”.

There’s nothing you can do, no way to bring back the light;
they’ll come for you tomorrow,
and this room around you will vanish,
your senses will expand to fill the void, overreach and
collapse back into your worst fears.

You will be reduced, diminished, minimized,
but this is not the first time,
so you know the score,
you remember how to seek out those places where you can be invisible –
just one more naked man, hovering between heaven and earth.

– Rhoufi

To reveal art and conceal the artist,
is art’s aim.

Oscar Wilde – “The Picture of Dorian Gray”

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  • Rhoufi
    Rhoufialmost 3 years ago

     

  • You need not open a door to be outside,
    to find yourself on the edge of darkness –
    between night and day,
    land and sky,
    heaven and earth.
     
    This is no place for you,
    you have no business here,
    with these other people,
    these invisible ones;
    ‘I do not belong here,’ you tell them, over and over.
     
    The first time it happened was a mistake, an accident;
    you hadn’t worked for months,
    the money ran out, and
    the light died in front of your eyes while reading in your chair;
    then you finally understood the meaning of “dying light”.
     
    There’s nothing you can do, no way to bring back the light;
    they’ll come for you tomorrow,
    and this room around you will vanish,
    your senses will expand to fill the void, overreach and
    collapse back into your worst fears.
     
    You will be reduced, diminished, minimized,
    but this is not the first time,
    so you know the score,
    you remember how to seek out those places where you can be invisible –
    just one more naked man, hovering between heaven and earth.

     
     

    – Rhoufi

  • patcheah
    patcheahalmost 3 years ago

    Brilliant work,Rhoufi! Image is amazing! Powerful! Love the dark space ,pose and the awesome colours. Touching poem,well written. Outstanding!

  • Thank you Pat – you’re a night owl like me. Captured this down at ACCA waiting for a play to start. It seemed to be crying out for some words. Thank you so much.

    – Rhoufi

  • Robin King
    Robin Kingalmost 3 years ago

    Rhoufi, this is gut-wrenching, both the image and your words.
    There’s power here, and devastation.
    I don’t know what else to say; it’s making me FEEL and taking away my thoughts.

    Wil be back to look again in a while.
    :)

  • Robin!!!!!! Thank you! What an enthusiastic comment. I don’t usually write poetry (this is more a prose poem really) but it came to me the instant I posted the photo last night and just went for it. He wasn’t actually upset at all, I just waited until he made a gesture that suited the ambiance and the under exposure did the rest. Thank you.

    – Rhoufi

  • Georgie Hart
    Georgie Hartalmost 3 years ago

    Oh God, how moving.
    Very powerful words and image Rhoufi.

  • Thank you Georgie. The image was a bonus really and the forecourt at ACCA often has very moody lighting. It’s a bit blurry due to the long exposure time and no tripod, but the mood persists. Thank you :-)

    – Rhoufi

  • shutterbug261
    shutterbug261almost 3 years ago

    the image alone is riveting…very powerful. your writing sends it into a toally different dimension. pure and simple, art at it’s finest

  • Wow thank you Michael. It all came together for me with this, must have been in just the right mood. Your words are really pleasing, because I nearly didn’t post the words. Thank you.

    – Rhoufi

  • 1more photo
    1more photoalmost 3 years ago

    Perfection in all ways
    image
    words
    sensitivity
    poetry
    light

    you ever best work to me……..
    even more than that……

  • Oh Madame Magali, you make me blush. For you to use the word “perfection” really makes me feel good. “you ever best work to me……..” is just about the best compliment I could get, and especially from you because of your wonderful work with shadow and light. Merci, you have made my day :-)))

    – Rhoufi

  • Dwarkan
    Dwarkanalmost 3 years ago

    Love a lot this “twilight” image, this feeling to be in between is deep and moving..
    C’est superbe !

  • Merci Dominique, the image truly inspired the prose poem: the massive weight of the darkness above and the slanting light creeping from out of frame and the crushed posture of the man invested a darkness to the ambiance I could not ignore.

    – Rhoufi

  • Gabriela Simut
    Gabriela Simutalmost 3 years ago

    Quoi dire de cette angoisse, de cette solitude, de cette souffrance que l image suggere?

  • Merci Gabriela. Oui, tous les éléments de cette scène de rue combinés à suggérer l’abandon tragique et un sentiment de désespoir, et les couleurs et la lumière ont joué leur rôle essentiel dans l’ambiance. Je vous remercie de votre visite et commentaire.

    – Rhoufi

  • mmargot
    mmargotalmost 3 years ago

    Exquisite work … as always.
    We do tend to find the darkest port in a storm : moving write, R.

  • Thank you Margot, I am trying to balance the dark with the light at the moment, but when I saw this guy. with that posture and that amazing backdrop and slanting light, I only saw dark.

    – Rhoufi

  • Sassafras
    Sassafrasalmost 3 years ago

    Vous avez représenté la façon dont ma douleur récente sentir. Seul dans votre art, il ya plus de lumière et plus d’espace.
    Vous êtes un artiste talentueux. Faire ce que l’expansion, Rhoufi. Il est important pour votre âme.
    Beauté et de la lumière pour vous,
    Sass

  • Oh Sass, que cela devrait exprimer votre sentiment personnel m’attriste, mais je suis heureux que vous voyez aussi la lumière. Expansion? Oui, je suis en train, mais cette coquille desséchée est résistant, il nécessite la relance … Je travaille là-dessus. Merci pour vos bonnes pensées … ils trouvent un coeur ouvert.

    – Rhoufi


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