ocean surrounding me
Incloses me
Pounds in on the heart
Makes it hard to breath
Hard to think
Hard to care about anything but that one thing
Slowly sufficating
but exciting
Wanting to escape
But a wanting to lock myself in
Fear to run
Fear to stay
The ocean pounding on my heart
My mind
My soul
Just to feel something for someone
To Love
DanaMS
Love it sweetie! :)
Rheenie replied
Why thanks lol everything keeping you on your toes lol
ein22
The ocean is one of those foreces that can never be limited in details and experiences. I relate to this, from an experence where I almost got swept by a rip underwater.
Fine work
Andrew
TheWanderingBoo
Beautiful piece of writing
Mardra
Good to see something new from you. Very captivating and great flow.
amarica
Congratulations on being featured in the All Out Emotion group!!!
Morgan MacLaren
Very emotive.
Carol Berliner
‘Brilliant writing