The Real Things
just a little pondering….
that came with a melody
but i can’t make it sing
on here
The Real Things belongs to the following groups:
All About Your Best Work, All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Everyday Life, Masterpieces: Literary Workshop, Melbourne & Victoria, Self as Other, Something To Say, The Healing Journey, The Word Tree, Unconventional Artistry - 3 per day, WMG and You're AcceptedIt’s these things
We feel
That make us
Real
So don’t
be afraid
To let me know
It’s these things
I think
That make us
Things that think
That we know
But we don’t know
It’s the whys
we see
When perhaps all
We
Should see
Is a little beauty
It’s these things
I think
That make us
Things that think
That we know
But we don’t know
Cause how could we?
With so many different beliefs?
How can you be sure
That you’ll get
What you’re working for?
Please wave, if you happen, to see me
Cause it’s these things
We feel
That make us
Real
So don’t
Be afraid
To let me know
VelvetGirl
beautiful. xx
Hayley Cafarella replied
thank you :)
Ushna Sardar
great written Rella!!!!! defo it goes to fav!!! huggles my friend
Hayley Cafarella replied
thanks so much gorgeous….actually my content this time reminded me of your writing :)
maxx
very lovely!!!
mikeyd
really nice, I especially like the line, “It’s the whys we see When perhaps all We Should see
Is a little beauty.” It says so much more than what you read at face value. beautiful!
Hayley Cafarella replied
thank you! That part actually inspired the whole thing…it was something that resonated with me after I saw “Man On Wire”...which I could not recommend more if you haven’t seen it :)
artyfifi
Lovely indeed. I agree with mikeyd. Well observed, wonderful. : )
Hayley Cafarella replied
Thank you so much xx
reflector
Awesomely written and great pondering ! I like the one line bits too. You captured the mystery of life perfectly.
Hayley Cafarella replied
Awwww, thanks dude!! I ended up with the one word lines because this little bit of inspiration came with a melody…so in my head there are beats there :P
amanda marx
love it . . . beautifully written
Hayley Cafarella replied
Thank you so much for taking the time to read…I am very glad you enjoyed it :D
Nicolas Hall
Beautiful!! I love the simplicity and the way this paces me as a reader. And, I love that it is a verysimple truth. . . insightfully expressed and so deep and so clear.
xo
nicolas
Hayley Cafarella replied
Thank you!! I am always trying to break things down in my head…I tend to think a lot of things are perceived as really complicated when they are really quite simple if you look at the parts… xoxo
helene ruiz
very nice! would love to hear the melody to this!