My head hurts
Pain seeps listlessly
From my limbs
And puddles
On the floor
Where I soak in it
Way out
Find it
Need air
Need help
Get out
Shackled
Why?
Can’t see
Can’t reach
So cold
Door creaks
She speaks
Her
Oh god
Can’t see
Pain streaks violently
Leaking blood
That puddles
In my eyes
And gurgles
Down my throat
Is this death?
Blade strikes
Over and again
Numb
Skin seeps listlessly
Leaking blood
That puddles
On the floor
Where I soak in it
Numb
And fading
A Vicious Attack - The Cutting
A little bit of fictional emotion
A little bit violent
A little bit psycho
Preceded by:
A Vicious Envy
A Vicious Intent – The Message
A Vicious Awakening – The Eye
A Vicious Preparation – The Blade
Jessica Tremp, 2 months ago
that’s rather achey to read…
Rella in reply to Jessica Tremp’s comment, 2 months ago
I’m not sure where Violent Rella is coming from…but she’s very mean to the girl in these poems!!
Janine Peterson, 2 months ago
Oh Rella….this is creepy stuff, good writing, but jeez, save the poor thing, will ya?
Ushna Sardar, 2 months ago
well written Rella!
Roger Sampson, 2 months ago
deep…sad…understanding…hard to read because…caring…hope…believe…Imaginaiades do love…so do friends… this I’m sure…as fiction, it is powerful…..................I know it’s fiction.
Rog
Trish Cooper, 2 months ago
WoW Rella..where is this rage to this girl coming from lol???So much going on here…..this one made me catch my breath and be happy I was not her lol….....Hugs my friend!!xoxoxoxoxox
Rella in reply to Janine Peterson’s comment, 2 months ago
Tis all in those writing stars….I kinda hope she gets saved too! :)
Rella in reply to Ushna Sardar’s comment, 2 months ago
Thanks Ushna xx
Rella in reply to Roger Sampson’s comment, 2 months ago
Definitely not the most pleasant piece I’ve ever written! But definitely fiction xox
Rella in reply to Trish Cooper’s comment, 2 months ago
Good point…maybe this is just a channeling of my stuck at home in pain rage!! In that case, I’d better save her…... :)
Miri, 2 months ago
some powerful stuff here, a lot of pain coming through
i like
‘Pain streaks violently
Leaking blood
That puddles..’
and
‘Skin seeps listlessly
Leaking blood
That puddles..’