Jumping Up And Down On The Inside

reflector
Author: reflector
Word Count: 312
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So many things we do in life
Can take you to a state where
You are jumping up and down on the inside

Catching the first rays of a new day
and thinking quietly to yourself “a new day”,
” That’s beautiful ! “
Jumping

Getting your first bike and taking your very first ride
Feeling that adrenaline surge
Jumping on the inside

Crashing into the water and paddling
Hungry for your first wave on a day when the waves are just so perfect
The surf hasn’t been this good for months, maybe years
It’s guaranteed to have you feeling like
You are jumping on the inside

Seeing that girl in school and realizing that she likes you, a lot
Finding out you like the same things
Jumping on the inside

Getting your first car and driving it for the first time
” Look at this car it’s perfect, I love it “
Jumping

You went for the new job and you got it !
The sky’s the limit now and can you feel it so strongly
And you start jumping on the inside

Your first child is born and it’s just such a miracle !
So tiny and dependent, but with eyes only for you
Now that has to take you to a place where you are
Jumping on the inside

Listening to your favourite music
Every note, every beat, every word
Flooding your mind with pure energy
You don’t want to fight the feeling now
Jumping

You had the most fun and the best day of your life
Relaxing with friends
Getting wild
Communicating
Jumping on the inside

Enjoying a special moment with your family
Where you feel that timeless connection
Love
You feel it and they feel it
A signpost moment
Has you all
Jumping on the inside, together

Jumping won’t make you tired
Do it !
Jump
Today

Jumping Up And Down On The Inside

When you feel that energy and you are extremely sure that you are ALIVE ! There are so many things that we do in life that can give us this great feeling.

Comments are very welcome ! Feedback is a great teacher for all of us.

Jumping Up And Down On The Inside belongs to the following groups:

All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Beach Art, Everyday Life, Safe Haven and WMG
  • jianina

    jianina, 7 months ago

    there is such a great and uplifting message here…an inspirational piece to just see all the good that there is around you>>>i love the pace and the flow>>it was a fluid read!!! :)

  • flipteez

    flipteez, 7 months ago

    Tiz why I adore you
    I’m jumping

  • reflector

    reflector in reply to jianina’s comment, 7 months ago

    Thanks a lot J ! I read it again now, and it feels like maybe my best poem. It is all so true and there’s nothing wrong about it – all positive moments and feelings.

  • reflector

    reflector in reply to flipteez’s comment, 7 months ago

    Well that’s a powerful reaction. The poem could be re-named Celebrate Your Life. We all try to, but sometimes we need to stop, take a break and think about those kind of things. Love what you like and know why you love it. I know why – for everything I’m passionate about.

  • jianina

    jianina, 7 months ago

    I would say my favorite piece of your as well!!

  • reflector

    reflector in reply to jianina’s comment, 7 months ago

    Thanks J ! If we all jumped at the same time maybe the world would wobble of it’s axis and then crash into the sun ! Hot Fun ! :D

  • dinghysailor1

    dinghysailor1, 5 months ago

    makes me want to jump even higher – tho not that bit about crashing into the sun – sounds painful! great writing my friend!
    :)

  • reflector

    reflector in reply to dinghysailor1’s comment, 5 months ago

    Thanks Dinghy, I’m glad it had that effect on you. It was written in a very different style to my other written work. Thanks for putting it into your Fav’s.

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