It took one.
when you dont know if a friend has changed
or was lying all along
It took one. belongs to the following groups:
All Things Poetic, Artistic, Philosophical, Childhood, Everyday Life, Lesbian and Bi-Women's Art, Melbourne & Victoria, Something To Say and The Word TreeOne year is all it took
Brought us together like never before
Creating perfect memories and laughter
Planting into my head these ideal lies
Of happiness
One new place is all it took
Let you change your mind
Fast ridded you of your old friends and loves
Changed through the bright surroundings
Of life
One paragraph is all it took
Made you see the truth
Rubbed from your mind the good times
Replaced them with the exclusion
Of difference
PJ Ryan
hugs
this is a really great write
xx
Ash rebeltherace replied
thankyou, i think its because its real.
if that makes sense..
ladyb
Beautifully written. x
Ash rebeltherace replied
thankyou saskia
H J Higgins
Succinct and honest—really lovely.
PJ Ryan
it makes perfect sense :)
Ash rebeltherace replied
im glad = ]
kossimarsalsa
i like it, it’s rather full of feeling.
xx
s-a
Ash rebeltherace replied
its choc a block full!
thankyou :D
juice
truth…is so powerful…greatly harnessed with your amazing writing style
Ash rebeltherace replied
thankyou so much!
Zolton
This one is really… memorable. Wish I’d been writing when I was your age.
Ash rebeltherace replied
thankyou!
id be lost without writing, but i will probably run out of things to say by the time im old!