My Garden

Rebekah  Anderson
Author: Rebekah Anderson
Word Count: 102
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My Garden

I can’t actually paint. Just a metaphor. Seemed a good idea at the time…

The world exists.
It is around me.
No choice.

The Good and Bad,
The Right and Wrong,
The Fair and Unfair,
Irreversibly interwoven,
To make the canvass on which we must paint ourselves.
This is my canvass.
No choice.

If I try to unweave it,
Separate it,
It will collapse all around me.

If I try to slash it,
Shred it,
I destroy only my portrait,
Myself.

I may control only my own brush strokes,
And the picture they create

And so the world exists.
It is around me.
I make it my Sunlit Garden,
Or my Prison.
This is my choice.

  • Luke Downes

    Luke Downes

    Those last three lines ring as true as anything I’ve ever been told about life.

    Have you seen The Visitor?

  • Rebekah Anderson replied

    No, I haven’t heard of it. Should I see it?

  • Luke Downes

    Luke Downes

    oh, yeah. absolutely. to me, it’s about a man who realizes just that.

  • Rebekah Anderson replied

    Sounds good. Might just investigate. Thanks!

  • ShadowDancer

    ShadowDancer

    love the idea you evoke here, it’s so true, and you wrote it so vividly.

  • Rebekah Anderson replied

    Thanks so much Miss! Glad to have you back online, by the way :-)

  • LeaLoo

    LeaLoo

    This is nice. Canvases are really helpful.

  • Rebekah Anderson replied

    Thanks!

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