Horror Hill

Sweating and shivering, I woke from my dream
Monsters hiding under my bed
Goblins and ghouls were staring at me
but was it all in my head?

I needed some air to calm my nerves
I slowly opened the door
My ankles were grabbed, I stumbled and fell
I saw then, that there was no floor !!!

Hanging onto my world, by my finger tips
I tried to scrambled inside
Screaming and scratching, they made me cry
I had to run and hide

The door slammed behind me, at last I was safe
A lighted pumpkin that I had not seen
But then I remembered what made me so scared
it just happened to be Halloween !!

© RebeccaWeston 2009

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    This is adorable. Love it.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Cassidy – take a look at the challenge – it may be fun XX
    Becca

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Glad to see the funny side of you. This is great and I sure had fun with it. Hope it wins. Good luck. Iris

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Iris – it was written in a very short time after I was asked to produce something to promote the challenge – I like the light hearted ones too – thanks for the fav too XX
    Becca

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Ha ha! This is soooooo awesome!!! So into the Halloween spirit. Love it! xoxoxo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Glad that you liked this one, Shar :o) XX
    Becca

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    haha you are amazing!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thank you dear friend – lol I’m so pleased that you like it Mwah !! XX
    Becca

  • wingsoffire

    wingsoffire

    This is cute and playful! I enjoy Halloween when it is a fun scarry!!!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you – yes I like the fun side of it too !! XX
    Becca

  • kevinmawson

    kevinmawson

    TBhis is excellent Becca! well done my friend!

    km.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Kevin – thanks for the fav too XX
    Becca

  • bluewhite
  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Excellent – thank you so much for my wonderful comment !!! XX
    Becca

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    This was fun. Please do some more. Well written indeed.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I will try just for you – thank you so much for your kind words XX
    Becca

  • FlowersEtc

    FlowersEtc

    Congratulations

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you so very much XX
    Becca

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    hahaha! aww Becca, you have such a way with capturing certain images and emotions! This was delightful! XXX

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    : O) thank you so much Erika – that’s so nice of you XX
    Becca

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    love this becca… seems like a lot of writers are getting into the halloween spirit !!!! thats very cool.. i might even have to get in on that action LOLLL
    love this dear

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks – This was to promote the challenge – with you should have a go at – you’d be good at it – the link is above XX
    Becca

  • Randall Spencer

    Randall Spencer

    Great poetry! I used the words on the picture that I made for Earthmonsters challenge. Well written and brings back memories of when I was alone in the woods without a light. Thanks for touching us with this and sharing it for this challenge. It is the first one that I have entered.

    Going through some learning curves.
    Randy

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Randall – I’m glad that you liked it enough to add it to your work – I hope that it works well for you – Good luck XX
    Becca

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Brilliant collaboration between 2 brilliant artist’s – you excell in everything you do Becca and its lovely to see what a great team you two make lets see more!!! x – David

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks David – I think that he has had enough of me now :o( hehe XX
    Becca

  • ROUBLE RUST
  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Wow – thank you very, very much – from both Earthmonster and myself – that’s ace news !! XX
    Becca

  • Earthmonster

    Earthmonster

    :) Congrats!!!!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    ....and to you too…we make a good team !!! mwah !! XX
    Becca

  • ANNIESUNSHINE

    ANNIESUNSHINE

    A great read

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Annie XX
    Becca

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