You and I

You bleed – I cry
I feed – you are nourished
You live – I die
I am hated – you are cherished

You hurt – I mend
I fall – you don’t break
You are lonely – I befriend
I give and you take

© RebeccaWeston 2009

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    such a great rendition on life cycle

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    mwah – to you Jessica – you are so lovely, always here so quickly to comment and such lovely comments too !! :o) XX
    Becca

  • Trenchtownrock

    Trenchtownrock

    You have just written the cycle of how the world is operated…

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you very much :o) XX
    Becca

  • JasmineLove

    JasmineLove

    Wow!!!!! Love it!!!!!!! Jasmine xo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Jasmine !! Love your comment too !! XX
    Becca

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    Thankyou for the nice compliment…I love this site and love people like you who write an share your work…so thankyou

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Jess you are a little angel !! XX
    Becca

  • Earthmonster

    Earthmonster

    Tell it like it is!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I always try to – no time for messing about !!! hehe – Thanks EM Mwah !! XX
    Becca

  • sunsette15

    sunsette15

    awwwwwwwwwwwwwww thanks bec

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    :o) XX

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    lovely piece becca..lots to think about in these few words..xx

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Peter I appreciate your comment XX
    Becca

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Love this. Needed to read it a few times. Still do. What I love about great poetry. xoxoxo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    wow – thank you, that’s a lovely thing to say XX
    Becca

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    Seems something is a bit off balance, no?

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Yes, sadly, some relationships are very much off balance – ‘out of kilter’ XXX
    Becca

  • valzart

    valzart

    Such soulful poetry sweetheART ‘} happy hippy hugglez

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you my dear friend XX
    Becca

  • Shoaib .

    Shoaib .

    beautifully written becca

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks my darling… so pleased that you like it XX
    Becca

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    I hope that person’s grateful for what you give…..Beautifully and powerfully written dear friend. XXX

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thank you, my dear friend – thankfully, this relationship is no more !!! XX
    Becca

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    POWERFUL, SAD AND TOO OFTEN TRUE!!! A RELATIONSHIP HAS TO BE ABOUT GIVE AND TAKE…TOO OFTEN ONE-SIDED!! XO

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    ain’t that the truth !!! Thanks Mr Ray XX
    Becca

  • rubyjo

    rubyjo

    so much said in 42 words darling.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thanks…. you angel !! :o) XX
    Becca

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  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you very much for this wonderful news XX
    Becca

  • Carambooge

    Carambooge

    Thats friggin awesome well spoken and so true to life – I know these feeling well

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    That’s an awesome comment – Thank you so much XX :o)
    Becca

  • Jim Hall

    Jim Hall

    I recommend that you stay away from all looking-glasses. You may fall through! Good write! JH

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you very much Jim Xx
    Becca

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    Awesome write. I love how you expressed this off kiltered relationship. Very well done.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I don’t have trouble with the ‘off kilter’ ones – it’s the normal ones that I can’t make last !!!! lol XX
    Becca

  • kevinmawson

    kevinmawson

    Excellent Becca,Congratulations on being Featured!

    km.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Kevin mwah !! XX
    Becca

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    Hi Becca – Great poetry so little words but definately so much said …......... your flair enriches the goodness of your soul ….......... beautiful words as always – Hey you got featured too and kept this one quite!! Congrats x – David

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Hello David – I’m glad you’re back and I’m glad to be back myself – Thanks for your wonderful words, which I’m certain I don’t deserve but they made me feel very special none the less XX
    Becca

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    I don’t know where I have been that I missed this one also. This is a great one also, Becca. Very meaningful. xoxo Iris

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Iris – sorry for the delay replying XX Becca

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