Enticement

Music soft and heart fast beating
I watch as she dances in front of me
Body moves to an enticing rhyme
Her beauty is only for me to see
Her hair flows freely, looks like ravens
Guarding the tower of her nubile frame
Taunts and teases with every movement
Playing with desires, an erotic game
Dancing closer, I smell the fragrance
Her sensual moans, I now can hear
I instinctively reach to touch this goddess
As she draws her body near
Music lost, I hear only heartbeat
The final layers of clothes are peeled
Time and space have disappeared
I am hers – my fate is sealed

© RebeccaWeston 2009

  • Sally Omar

    Sally Omar

    Awesome collab…both words & art!!!! Bravo!!!!!! xxoxoxo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Sally, you’re a star !! XX
    Becca

  • Thomas Simunsen

    Thomas Simunsen

    wonderful words, very enticing and erotic. Fantastic collab. Welldone Kevin and Becca.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks Tom – have missed you – hope you are well and very happy :o) XX
    Becca

  • Tracey Mac

    Tracey Mac

    Great collab Becca, nicely woven and love the final line, excellent read from both of you x

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Tracey, much appreciated XX
    Becca

  • F.A. Moore

    F.A. Moore

    I love when you two collaborate! Bravo. :D

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Fran – it has become quite a regular occurrence !! haha XX
    Becca

  • bill bell

    bill bell

    Wonderful job Becca the flame of the words dances with the flame of the painting.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thanks Bill, much appreciated XX
    Becca

  • Ushna Sardar

    Ushna Sardar

    beautiful Rebecca! xo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you so very much XX
    Becca

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    Very alluring becca, great write… x

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    ...and Thank You, Peter – I hope you are well XX
    Becca

  • KEITH  R. WILLIAMS

    KEITH R. WILL...

    beautiful

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I’m glad that you liked this, Keith. Thank you very much XX
    Becca

  • skinnyman

    skinnyman

    I am better now that my mind has settled, thank you….xx

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I am so pleased to hear that Peter {hug}
    Becca

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Lovely flow to this Becca….like a soft dance. XX

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    aww…. thank you Erika [big smile]... you are so thoughtful XX
    Becca

  • Cassidy JK (Ra Or Emraeh)

    Cassidy JK (Ra...

    Really wonderful collaboration. Gorgeous words and beautiful art.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Cassidy, I’m really pleased that you like it XX
    Becca

  • JRGarland

    JRGarland

    I really like this collaboration you’ve done. Very appealing indeed.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    [big smile] thank you, you are very kind XX
    Becca

  • ricardo perez jr

    ricardo perez jr

    now thats so nice ,wow man!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Wow !! thanks very much and thank you for the feature in Lifeline
    too!!! :o)) XX
    Becca

  • raymondoantonio

    raymondoantonio

    BELLISSIMO!! SENSUAL WRITING AND ART WORK!! XX

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you Ray – much appreciated – mwah XX
    Becca

  • TBall

    TBall

    hot stuff- you have your groove …....... groovying .

    I actually had an image of you dancing in front of a mirror, celebrating your own beauty and womanhood- grounded and freed to move and to expand

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks – I guess it could be read that way too, nice comment, thank you ! XX
    Becca

  • JonoCarrick

    JonoCarrick

    Ooooh Rebecca! This was silky, eductive and flowed like a fine red wine!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    [big smile] I’m so glad that you like it, thank you. mwah !! XX
    Becca

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    How perfectly these dance as one.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you – I’m very pleased that you think so XX
    Becca

  • RebeccaWeston

    RebeccaWeston

    Thank you to Earthmonster for choosing this poem to accompany his gorgeous image Enticement!
    This is a very special honour for me XX
    Becca

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    You did it again great collaborations between all 3 artist! This is why RB is so good great words and artwork a fav. for me x – David

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thanks David – I’m privileged to be able to work with such great artists as Kevin and Earthmonster XX
    Becca

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Wow Becca! An incredible collaboration. Art and poetry collide into breathtaking masterpiece!!! Outstanding and brilliant beauty!!! xoxoxo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you so very much Shar, I really appreciate your lovely words of encouragement XX
    Becca

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Wonderful collaboratoin. And the words are as always, visionary and you could really see her seducting him and his feelings of lust. He fell for it though. lol Iris

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    He sure did – typical bloke !! (sorry guys!! hehe) – Thanks very much Iris XXX
    Becca

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