Missing You

As I watch TV, a couple will kiss
A tear fills my eye and it’s you that I miss
I want you to hold me, so tender but tight
I can’t shake the feeling, try as I might
To kiss you again would be a wonderful thing
and know all the feelings of joy, you would bring

© RebeccaWeston 2009

  • silverstrummer -  David Everitt

    silverstrummer...

    You have done it again …...... I so feel these words and know what pain they hold ….. just those two words can bring lots of discomfort but also so many happy memories that we can look back on!
    Don’t ever try and shake the feeling greet it with the love of your heart and embrace it.
    Beatifull written again ….... I feel so proud that you do such lovely writing! (hug) – David :>))

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, bless you David. I get all my encouragement from you and the other lovely people who take time to comment on my work. Thank you so much – you restore my faith in people XX

  • Druidstorm

    Druidstorm

    “The heart is lost without its hope! And our memories but a ghost, it is touch that we need!” Your craft speaks to the heart friend! BRAVO!!!...)o(

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you for your kind comment. XX

  • Erika .

    Erika .

    Oh this is so sweet Rebecca..I love it.!!

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thanks Erika – I like this one too XX

  • jacqleen

    jacqleen

    So Tender….and this is sooo filled with DREAMS and HOPES…...I LOVED this piece!!! xxx

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Aww, thanks jacq !! It’s good to have some hopes and dreams XXX

  • myREVolution

    myREVolution

    i LOVE this :)

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you so very much XX

  • Thomas Simunsen

    Thomas Simunsen

    brilliant, I have been here, I felt your anguish. Wonderful as always

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    I think that most of us had a similar moment. Thanks Tom – {{hug}} XX
    Becca

  • Coronus

    Coronus

    This sings to me Becca.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, I’m so pleased about that Jono, thanks XX
    Becca

  • Nascha

    Nascha

    Ah lovely Becca. (At least got a kiss!) Hope there’s more in the pipeline. xxxx

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    It would be nice !! Thank you Jane XX
    Becca

  • lupa

    lupa

    the longing…you write so well, Becca

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you very much, how lovely of you :o) XX
    Becca

  • autumnwind

    autumnwind

    Oh, so well written. A feeling of such longing. Beautiful sad. xoxoxo

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Ah, thank you Shar – nice of you XX
    Becca

  • happyfeet5

    happyfeet5

    Beautiful., Long or short, you have a way with words Becca. xoxo Iris

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Well, thank you Iris you are so encouraging and supportive XX
    Becca

  • bluewhite

    bluewhite

    Ah yes! A longing well felt.

  • RebeccaWeston replied

    Thank you so much XX
    Becca

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